Oral Interpretation Speech Your next speech will be an oral interpretation speech in which you choose two or more literature selections (poem, essay, fiction excerpt, non-fiction excerpt, lyrics, etc.) that you will use to develop a speech around a single theme. The literature you choose should be of good quality and understandable to your audience. We will begin these speeches on ______________________. The time limit is 2-4 minutes. Preparing your speech: 1. Begin by choosing a theme (subject) you feel interest in to begin your search for literature. Here is a list of possible theme ideas: Fear laughter humor anger joy death revenge love pets shame romance being a nerd music art fairy tales war military pain family seasons disputes school athletics heroes rape crime abortion faith hobbies strength 2. Next, begin searching for pieces of literature you like that address the common theme you have chosen. You must have at least two pieces of literature, but you may have more if you like. Do not choose more than four. The following are types of literature you may choose from: poems essays Song lyrics play monologues short stories play dialogues novels movie scripts 3. When searching for your literature selections, look for ways the pieces connect or fit together and how you might develop the theme using these pieces of literature. 4. Develop an introduction that gets the audience’s attention (capture line), introduces the theme (assert line), piques your audience’s interest (motivate line), and presents your ideas about the theme (preview line). 5. Next, think transition. Think about the order in which you might present the selections. Consider how you might transition from one selection to the next, developing a transition between each that includes the title and author of the selection and a brief introduction to each selection. 6. Develop a conclusion where you transition from your selection to the closing and one that draws together and reviews your main observations about the topic and those of the authors you chose. Remember to link back to something that you shared toward the beginning of your speech, and then end with a BANG, a statement that will leave a strong, lasting impression. 7. Complete the Oral Interpretation Outline. Outlines are due on ________________________. 8. Practice reading your speech with feeling and expression. Bring the literature to life. Practice enough so that you know the material well enough to look at the audience about half the time during your speech. Read the Oral Interpretation Rubric carefully so you know exactly how your presentation will be graded. Practice your presentation in front of a mirror and also in front of a parent or some other adult who can complete the practice sheet. Practice sheets are due _______________________________. Complete Oral Interpretation Outline Title: School I. Intro Capture (grab their attention): School, it’s the law! We are all obviously required to attend school. A flow chart of a normal school year might go something like this: learn the material, quiz, learn more material, quiz, test, period of transition, forget past material, and start all over again. It’s a process that seems to go on and on and on. Assert (introduce your literature theme): I’ve chosen a collection of poems by Kenn Nesbitt that show the DEEP and MEANINGFUL reason behind school behaviors. Motivate (pique your audience’s interest): You may want to look at your own attitudes and ideas about school. Preview (your ideas about the theme): In these selections, I’ll touch upon First Main Point: teachers, Second Main Point: students, and Third Main Point: some of the tools of school. Transition (includes title, author and brief introduction/information of how the selection fits with the topic): Let’s begin by exploring what would happen without those helpful, directive people – our teachers – in this poem by Kenn Nesbitt entitled “The Teachers Jumped Out of the Window.” II. Body A. Selection one (copy and paste selection text here): The teachers jumped out of the windows. The principal ran for the door. The nurse and librarian bolted. They’re not coming back anymore. The counselor, hollering madly, Escaped out the door of the gym. The coach and custodian shouted And ran out the door after him. The lunch ladies threw up their ladles, Then fled from the kitchen in haste, While all of the students looked puzzled, As staff members scurried and raced. We’d never seen anything like it. But, still, it was pretty darned cool To see all the staff so excited To leave on the last day of school. 1. 2. Explain Meaning: The teachers and the staff sure were excited to get out of school on the last day. Explain Relationship to the topic: Maybe you’ve never thought about how you and your teachers might share the same attitude about school at times. Transition (includes title, author and brief introduction/information of how the selection relates to first selection): Perhaps the teachers were so anxious to leave school because of students like the one in the next Nesbitt poem, “At History, I’m Hopeless.” B. Selection two (copy and paste selection text here) At history I’m hopeless. At spelling I stink. In music I’m useless. From science I shrink. At art I’m atrocious. In sports I’m a klutz. At reading I’m rotten. And math makes me nuts. At language I’m lousy Computers? I’m cursed. In drama I’m dreadful. My writing’s the worst. “I don’t understand it,” my teacher exclaims. I tell her they ought to teach Video games. 1. 2. Explain Meaning: The speaker in this poem doesn’t think he can do anything well. Explain Relationship to the topic: Everything about school seems to drive him crazy. Transition (includes title, author and brief introduction/information of how the selection relates to first selection): The student even talks about math making him nuts. He’s not the only one. The student in this last Nesbitt poem relied a little too much on his calculator. Maybe you do too, even if math doesn’t drive you nuts. C. Selection two (copy and paste selection text here) Calculator, calculator, Help me with my math. Help me do my homework Or I’ll feel the teacher’s wrath. Calculator, calculator, Add these numbers quick. Truly you’re a wizard With this tough arithmetic. Calculator, calculator, Multiply, divide. Decimals, percentages; You solve them all with pride. Calculator, calculator, Don’t be such a jerk. Thank you for the answers But you have to show your work. 1. 2. III. Explain Meaning: I think this student was feeling a little stressed about his schoolwork. Explain Relationship to the topic: And work is one of the biggest parts of school. Conclusion Transition: But as all of our selections have shown us, there are many dynamics in school, like Review: First main point: teachers, Second main point: students, Third main point: and all of things we use in school. Link Back: I hope these poems helped you reflect on your own attitude and ideas about school. Yes, it is a necessary evil in the eyes of many, but it can be a light-hearted one if you take the attitude of Kenn Nesbitt and Bang! just HAVE FUN with it! Complete Oral Interpretation Outline I. Title: ______________________________________________ Intro Capture (grab their attention): ________________________________________________________________________ Assert (introduce your literature theme): ________________________________________________________________________ Motivate (pique your audience’s interest): ________________________________________________________________________ Preview (your ideas about the theme): First Main Point ____________________________________________________ Second Main Point__________________________________________________ Third Main Point __________________________________________________ Transition (includes title, author and brief introduction/information of how the selection fits with the topic): ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ II. Body A. Selection one (copy and paste selection text here) 1. Explain Meaning______________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 2. Explain Relationship to the topic _________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Transition (includes title, author and brief introduction/information of how the selection relates to first selection): ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ B. Selection two (copy and paste selection text here) 1. Explain Meaning _____________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 2. Explain Relationship to the topic _________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ III. Conclusion Transition_______________________________________________________________ Review: First main point __________________________________________________ Second main point __________________________________________________ Third main point __________________________________________________ Link Back:______________________________________________________________ Bang! __________________________________________________________________ Oral Interpretation Speech Rubric Introduction A The introduction is interesting and catchy. It includes all 4 CAMP components. It clearly introduces the theme and offers meaningful, interesting commentary about it. It provides a smooth transition into the first selection, stating the author and title of the selection. The introduction is fully memorized and the speaker makes eye contact with each person in the audience. Selections A The selections are high quality literature, chosen for their effect on the audience. They illustrate the theme in a meaningful way and fit together well. Interpretation A The speaker brings the selections to life in a way that clearly reflects the emotion and/or meaning of the pieces. Transitions A Transitions are skillfully written and help the speaker move smoothly and cleverly from one selection to the next. They clearly introduce the title and the author and make a meaningful comment about the overall nature of the selections. The transitions are memorized. Delivery A The speaker’s posture is relaxed and confident. Movements are smooth and natural. S/he handles the script skillfully and uses meaningful gestures that look natural. S/he presents the material with poise and confidence. The speaker frequently looks up to connect with the audience. B The introduction is interesting. It includes all 4 CAMP components. It introduces the theme and offers interesting commentary about it. It provides a good transition into the first selection, stating the author and title of the selection. The introduction is mostly memorized and the speaker makes eye contact with most people in the audience. B The selections are good literature. They illustrate the theme and fit together. C The speech has an introduction. It states the theme and makes a brief comment about it. It provides a transition into the first selection, stating the author and title of the selection. The introduction is partly memorized and the speaker makes eye contact with some people in the audience. D/F The speech has no introduction. It fails to state the theme or comment about it. It provides no transition into the first selection. The introduction is mostly read and the speaker makes little if any eye contact with the people in the audience. C The selections are adequate. They relate to the theme and seem connected. B The speaker presents in such a way as to make the pieces interesting. C The speaker’s interpretation of the literature is adequate, but does not really reflect the emotion or meaning. C The speech contains transitions, but they seem mechanical. The speaker only mentions the title and author of the selections. The speaker makes a general comment about each selection. The transitions are somewhat memorized. D/F The selections are poor quality literature or inappropriate. They do not relate to the theme and/or are not well connected. D/F The speaker’s interpretation is flat and fails to breathe any life into the words on the page. D/F The speech has few, if any, transitions. The speaker fails to reveal the title or author and does not make a comment about each selection. The transitions are mostly read. B Transitions are mostly well written and provide a smooth avenue from one selection to the next. They introduce the title and the author and make a comment about the overall nature of the selections. The transitions are mostly memorized. B The speaker mostly looks relaxed and confident. S/he avoids fidgeting and other distracting movements. S/he handles the script well and uses good gestures. S/he presents the material well. The speaker regularly looks up to connect with the audience. C The speaker has moments of looking confident. S/he occasionally fidgets or makes distracting body movements. S/he handles the script in a way that is not distracting and uses only a few gestures. S/he does an adequate job of presenting the material. The speaker sometimes looks at the audience. D/F The speaker looks uncomfortable and/or fidgets nervously. S/he handles the script in a way that is distracting and/or uses no gestures. S/he does an inadequate job of presenting the material. The speaker seldom or never looks at the audience while reading the selection. Vocal Quality A Speaker’s volume and speed is appropriate and easy to listen to. Voice projects well. S/he uses interesting vocal variety and makes the selections highly interesting. S/he is enthusiastic and expressive. S/he articulates clearly and cleanly. B Speaker’s volume and speed is mostly good, but could be improved in spots. S/he sounds interested and uses variety in speaking. S/he makes the selections interesting. The voice is interesting to listen to. S/he articulates well. C Speaker needs to increase volume or adjust speed. S/he needs to sound more enthusiastic. S/he reads the words well, but there is only a little vocal inflection and life in the presentation. Articulation is adequate. Nonverbal Messages A The speaker looks at everyone in the audience during the course of the speech. Eye contact is evenly distributed. The speaker looks pleasant and interested. Weight is evenly distributed throughout the speech. Conclusion A The conclusion effectively draws together the ideas in the speech by using all 4 components (TRLB). It leaves a strong final impression. The conclusion is memorized. B The speaker looks at mostly everyone in the audience during most of the speech. Mostly, s/he looks pleasant and interested. The speaker sways or shifts weight just a few times. C Speaker looks at the audience only a little during the speech. S/he needs to spread eye contact evenly. S/he needs to look more pleasant and interested. The speaker sways or shifts weight occasionally. C The speech has a conclusion, but it fails to give the speech a sense of finality or leave a positive impression. The speech does not include all 4 components (TRLB). The conclusion is somewhat memorized. B The conclusion clearly ends the speech and attempts to draw the ideas together by using all 4 components (TRLB). The conclusion is mostly memorized. Speech Presentation ____________________/40 chewing gum (-4) Pre-Writing (outline) __________________/20 hair in eyes (-3) Practice Sheet ___________________________/15 inadequate length (-4) Self-Evaluation __________________________/10 Comments: Total Grade: _____________________________/85 D/F Speaker is too soft or too fast to understand. S/he speaks with a monotone voice and/or uses filler words frequently. Presentation is flat or lifeless. S/he needs to work on articulating. Some parts are hard to understand. D/F The speaker avoids eye contact with the audience. S/he looks bored, nervous or disinterested. Speaker sways or shifts eight often. D/F The speech has no conclusion and/or the conclusion is mostly read. Oral Interpretation Practice Sheet for Parent/Adult Speaker’s name: ______________________________________________________________ Evaluator’s name: ____________________________________________________________ Evaluator’s signature: _________________________________________________________ Length of the speech: _______________________ (is to be between 2-4 minutes) Two of our main goals in preparing and performing an oral interpretation speech are to increase our effectiveness in (1) transitions (connections) and (2) paralanguage (vocal and facial expressions) in all of our speeches. Thank you for assisting this speaker and giving constructive feedback and encouragement in these and the following areas: Introduction: Is the introduction catchy? Is it fitting for the literature selection? Do you know what theme and main points you’ll be hearing about? Content: Is the literature selected interesting? Are the selections related well to the theme? List the selections: Transitions: Are effective connections made between the selections that link them and help the audience move from one selection to the next? Voice: Is the volume and speed appropriate? Does the speaker project well and display enthusiasm? Does the speaker vary the tone and use expression? Body Movements: Does the speaker sit or stand straight and look confident? Does the speaker avoid fidgeting or other distracting movements? Does the speaker use appropriate and natural gestures? Eye Contact: Does the speaker make eye contact with everyone in the audience while looking friendly and pleasant? Does the speaker look up and connect with the audience often during the reading of the selections? Conclusion: Does the conclusion effectively and creatively end the speech? Does it make a strong, positive final impression? List at least two things the speaker could do to improve this speech.