Five ways to integrate/blend quotes: Integrating Quotations Into Essays Five ways to integrate/blend Why Use T-L-Q’s? • Always integrate quotations into your text. NEVER JUST DROP A QUOTATION IN WITHOUT AN APPROPRIATE TRANSITION AND LEAD-IN! In other words, you must use your own words to introduce every direct quote. Paraphrase • A restatement of a text in your own words, often to simplify or clarify meaning. • In addition, the author conveys every detail about Tom’s brush with death on the ledge which includes every placement of his hands and feet, as well as everything he thinks, sees, and hears while out there. Number 1 1. Lead into a quotation with a VERB – use a comma. For example, Paul, trying to keep Kemmerich’s spirits up encouragingly states, “Just eat decently and you’ll soon be well again” (30). Introductory verbs like “states,” “argues,” “implies,” “writes,” “claims,” or “agrees” should be in the present tense and should accurately reflect the intention of the passage. When quoted material is introduced with a comma or colon, the first quoted word is CAPITALIZED. Make your verbs strong verbs. Instead of using “says,” consider words that describe the emotion of the statement such as “utters,” “declares,” “proclaims,” “affirms,” “shouts,” “cries,” etc. Number 2 2. Lead into a quotation with the word THAT. Moreover, reflecting upon the enemy, Paul realizes that “they are more human and more brotherly towards one another . . . than we are” (169). When quoted material is introduced by “that” or when it forms a part of a sentence, the first quoted word is NOT capitalized. Number 3 3. Lead into a quotation with a complete sentence. Follow with a colon and two spaces before the quotation. Furthermore, Paul describes his haunting future perfectly: “We will be weary, broken, burnt out, rootless, and without any hope” (254). Number 4 4. Lead into a quotation with an introductory phrase or clause. For instance, during a bombardment an inexperienced recruit “creeps under [Paul’s] arm, his head close to [Paul’s] chest” (61). Number 5 5. Split the quotation. Additionally, Paul claims, “It’s all rot that they put in the war-news,” in order to further comment “about the good humour of the troops” (125). You would need to integrate a T-L for the above direct quote. Also, in general, don’t end a paragraph with a quote; instead, end it with your own thought. Ellipses Ellipses (. . .) indicate that some unnecessary words have been left out of a quotation. Note that when you are just pulling out and quoting a word or short phrase you do not need to use an ellipsis to represent that something else was with it. Also, do not use an ellipsis to indicate that you have left out the beginning of a sentence. Brackets Use brackets [ ] to indicate any changes/alterations you make to quotations while fitting them into your sentences (for reasons of style, verb tense, or general understanding). Weaving What is Weaving???? • Weaving is an advanced form of TLQ— Transition, Lead in, Quote. Weaving refers to what you establish in the lead-in or lead-out of your quote. This can include specific context to set up the quote or perhaps even some commentary. • To weave effectively a writer incorporates the most essential 12-15 words from the quote and blends it with their lead-in/lead-out. What do I include in the lead in after my transition? • Establish context from where you take the quote from the short story/novel for your lead-in. • Answer at least 2-3 of the following questions regarding your quote in order to provide context for your lead-in: • Where, Who, What, When, Why, How? Where does this happen in the story? Why is it important? What is the significance? When does this happen in the story? Who is narrating this? Weaving Continued • Quote: “as usual the window didn’t budge” (7). • For example, the protagonist Tom Benecke reveals at the beginning of the story that “as usual the window didn’t budge” (Finney 7), foreshadowing his upcoming difficulties with that same window. • Who is thinking this? The protagonist, Tom Benecke • When does this happen in the story? The beginning • Why is the quote important? It establishes foreshadowing Transitions To Emphasize or Conclude definitely, particularly, obviously, in fact, indeed, in any case, absolutely, positively, naturally, always, forever, never, emphatically, unquestionably, undoubtedly, undeniably, without reservation, certainly Transitions To Give an Example for example, for instance, in this case, on this occasion, in this situation, to illustrate, in addition, furthermore To Summarize or Conclude In brief, on the whole, accordingly, thus, as a result, consequently, ultimately, finally, undoubtedly Transitions To Add or Compare and, again, and then, besides, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, nor, too, next, moreover, additionally, likewise, in fact, compared to, as To Contrast whereas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, on the contrary, in comparison, where, up against, balanced against, but, although, conversely, meanwhile, after all, in contrast, although this may be true Weak Verbs vs. Strong Verbs WEAK VERBS for integrating quotations and analysis: Says, goes on to say, tells, this quote shows, states For example, Mr. White says, “I wish my son alive again” (57). This quote shows…. Stronger verb choice: Additionally, after his wife begs him to use the monkey paw, Mr. White reluctantly proclaims, “I wish my son alive again” (57). You Try: Furthermore, when it seems as if his dead son is knocking at the door, Mr. White __adverb___ _strong verb choice___, “Don’t let him in” (58).