Unit4 Growing up
Task
The person who has influenced me most!
Longpao secondary shool
Chen Daojin
who has influenced you most？
（对你影响最大）
influence（影响）
influence
me most？
Luckily
（幸运的是）
Growing
up（成长）
（对我影响最大）
hard（艰难的）
words
and
actions
face
many
problems
aroundparents（father、mother）
us（我们身边）
（面对很多问题）
（言行）
relatives（亲戚）
teachers
friends
neighbours（邻居）
父爱如山
• Father’s love is like a
mountain
Thank you ，Father
I love you!
• Learning aims
描
述
• 1） To learn to describe the person
who has influenced you most.
• 2）To learn to be grateful to others and
care for others.
关 爱
感 恩
• Importance and difficulty
• 1) To learn to write about the person
who has influenced you most.
The person who has influenced me most
A Mr Wu is asking each of the Class 1, Grade 9
students to write about the person who has
influenced him or her most. He shows them an
article. （books open，P60）
Listen carefully & Answer questions
1. Who has influenced the writer most?
2.How old is her father?
3.What is her father like and what does the writer
think of him?
Listen carefully & Answer questions
1. Who has influenced the writer most?
Her father.
2.How old is her father?
He is in his fifties.
in one’s twenties/
thirties/ forties/…
3.What is her father like and what does the writer
think of him?
He is kind and helpful and has a heart full of
love .
B
Read the article and
complete the blanks.
most
The person who has influenced me ______
my
father
Para1
working A_______factory
Introduction
local
fifties
In his_________
age
place
something unusual about him
1.He is ready to help anyone.
Main body
2.He gave our TV to a family who could not___________one.
afford
Personality 3.He ________
cares for the children who have lost their parents.
Para2-34.Whenever he has some _________
money left, he gives it to someone
kind and
________
helpful
in need.
blood
5.He has donated ___________
many times since 1990.
cancer
6.He has donated blood cells to people with blood___________.
7.To my surprise,he has decided to donate his _______
body for
血癌
medical research血细胞
after his death.
Para4
Conclusion
My opinions He always seems to be _______to
kinder others than to his own family
love
He has a heart full of ________.
Pre-writing: Useful expressions
...is the person who has influenced me most
...is in his ...(twenties/thirties/forties)
You will not find anything unusual（了不起的事情）
about him until...
...has always been kind/helpful , ......
To my surprise,...
When I was a little girl/boy, I could not
understand...Now I realize that…
假如你是Sandy, 你学校正在举行写作比赛，主题是
“The person who has influenced me most", 字数
100个字左右。内容如下：
四十多岁，
在当地医院工作
工作细心
对待病人有耐心
My uncle
以前我没发现他有什么
不同寻常的（了不起）
地方，现在我意识到...
乐于助人
关爱一些失独老人
使我惊讶的是，
他已经决定...
Structure
My Uncle
Introduction
Para1
Main body Para2-3
Conclusion
Para4
age,job
Personalities
Examples
My ideas
假如你是Sandy, 你学校正在举行写作比赛，主题是
“The person who has influenced me most", 字数
100个字左右。内容如下：
四十多岁，
在当地医院工作
工作细心
对待病人有耐心
My uncle
以前我没发现他有什么
不同寻常的（了不起）
地方，现在我意识到...
乐于助人
关爱一些失独老人
使我惊讶的是，
他已经决定...
Criteria
评 分 标 准
满分
内容、信息全面、完成任务
5分
语言（句子结构、语法、用词）
5分
行文连贯、逻辑
3分
（字数、大小写、标点等）
2分
总分
15分
得分
Post-writing: Sample
The person who has influenced me most is my uncle.He is
in his forties.He has worked in this hospital for years.
As a doctor, he is both kind and patient with patients.he
is so careful that he has never made any mistakes. He
says:"As a doctor,We can't be too careful."Moreover,he
cares for the old who have lost their only children.To my
surprise, my uncle has decided to donate not only all his
money but also his body after his death.
I didn't find anything unusual about him before.Now I
realize that he is a man who has a heart full of love.
Homework:
1. Remember some useful
expressions.
2. Write about the person who has
influenced you.
Thank you for listening!