Let’s Talk About Diction Ms. Katz English III Diction Word choice, or general character of the language used by the author. Words have three levels. 1. Appearance 2. Sound 3. Meaning Mono vs. Poly • 1 syllable vs. multi syllable • “It is the lark that sings so out of tune” • “Straining harsh discords and unpleasing sharps” – (Act 3 Scene 5. Romeo and Juliet) Romeo and Juliet Euphonious vs. Cacophonous • Pleasant Sounding vs. Harsh Sounding • "By lunch time, my stomach boils with anger.” boil= cacophonous • “I feel at peace”Peace= Euphonious Literal vs. Figurative • Accurate with out embellishment vs. embellished and imagined “But not her maid since she is envious”(Literal- act 2. Sc. 2) • “But soft, what light through yonder window breaks? It is the East, and Juliet is the sun” (Figurative- act. 2 sc. 2) Romeo and Juliet Denotative vs. connotative • Exact meaning vs. Suggest, emotional meaning • “I really love you. I’m crazy about you...” • “The doctor was a thin quiet little man who seemed disturbed by the war” A Farewell to Arms Objective vs. Subjective Objective: Impersonal and unemotional language Example: “The lawn started at the beach and ran toward the front door for a quarter of a mile” (The Great Gatsby, page 6). vs. Subjective: Personal and emotional language Example: There was a slow, pleasant movement in the air, scarcely a wind, promising a cool, lovely day. (The Great Gatsby, page 152) Hyperbole vs. Understated Deliberate exaggeration of facts Example of a Hyperbole from The Odyssey by Homer: “We’re men of Atrides Agamemnon, whose fame is the proudest thing on Earth”(Pg 245). Example of Understated Diction from Hard Times, by Charles Dickens: “He sunk into a chair and moved once all that night”(Pg 67). Slang • Vernacular, casual speech, sometimes humorous • “Don’t play booty with me.” – Bill Sikes from Oliver Twist • “He’s game enough now, I’ll engage.” – Toby on Bill Sikes Colloquial • Regional/ provincial language • “Bloody hell!” ~Ronald Weasley From Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire by J.K. Rowling (statement indigenous to the English) Jargon • Language specific to a field or position • “Late in the second quarter, he decided against a field goal on a fourth-and-one...drove 82 yards for a touchdown and a 20-19 lead at half-time.” By Chris Foster, L.A. Times Sports Section (football jargon) Cliché • Figurative language that has lost its freshness and clarity • “Everything that has happened for me since moving here has just been icing on the cake. ” – Emeril Lagasse (A trite expression used to show how easily a task can be completed.) Assonance • Repetition of similar vowel sounds in closely associated words • Example: “Through the balmy air of night How they ring out their delight!” “The Bells” by Edgar Allen Poe Consonance • Repetition of similar consonant sounds in closely associated words. • Example: “He gives his harness bells a shake To ask if there is some mistake. “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening” By Robert Frost Alliteration • Repetition of initial consonant sounds in closely associated words. • Example: “I have stood still and stopped the sound of feet” “Acquainted with the Night” by Robert Frost Onomatopoeia • Words whose sounds suggest their meaning. • Example: She heard the buzzing of the bee.