Lesson 6 Today’s Agenda 1. Debrief 2. “We Real Cool” by Gwendolyn Brooks ~Structure Computer Lab Debriefing What did you learn in the lab? How are your test scores? Your GPA? Any requirements for college you didn’t know beforehand? Should you change your life plan? THE POOL PLAYERS. SEVEN AT THE GOLDEN SHOVEL. We real cool. We Left school. We Lurk late. We Strike straight. We Sing sin. We Thin gin. We Jazz June. We Die soon. ~Gwendolyn Brooks, 1959 “We Real Cool” In Her Own Words THE POOL PLAYERS. SEVEN AT THE GOLDEN SHOVEL. We real cool. We Left school. We Lurk late. We Strike straight. We What do we learn from the subtitle? Why bookend with “we”? Diction - “lurk” and “strike”? Infer because they “lurk late”? “strike straight”? Sing sin. We Thin gin. We Why “sing”? How is “thin” used? Jazz June. We Die soon. “jazz June”?? Gwendolyn Brooks, “We Real Cool” from Selected Poems. Copyright © 1963 by Gwendolyn Brooks. Reprinted with the permission of the Estate of Gwendolyn Brooks. Form and Structure We real cool. We left school. We lurk late We strike straight. We sing sin. We thin gin. We jazz June. We die soon. How does the sound of the poem change? How do the pace and rhythm of the poem change? How does the tone of the poem change? Are any elements of the poem lost when the lines are presented in "natural" sounding sentences? Form and Structure THE POOL PLAYERS. SEVEN AT THE GOLDEN SHOVEL. We real cool. We left school. We lurk late. We strike straight. We sing sin. We thin gin. We jazz June. We die soon. How does the sound of the poem change? How do the pace and rhythm of the poem change? How does the tone of the poem change? Are any elements of the poem lost when the lines are presented in "natural" sounding sentences? Is the prose poem as powerful as Brooks' version? Why or why not? Your Turn Write your own “We Real Cool” poem. Follow the structure of Brooks’s original. “We” at the end of the line. Rhyme scheme. Single syllables. Eight lines minimum. When people see you and your friends, what would they say about your attitudes/mannerisms?