Analyzing Poetry William Butler Yeats’ “The Second Coming” and Rudyard Kipling’s “The White Man’s Burden” • Title • Paraphrase • Connotation • Attitude • Shifts • Title • Theme Title • First, you have to look at the title. Just look at it. Don't try to be all artistic and read into it, simply write down what your initial impression is. What immediately pops into your head? What does it make you feel? Any guesses as to what the poem's about? This step is important, as your initial impression of the title versus your final impression can reveal a lot about the poem itself. Paraphrase • This is pretty self-explanatory. However, don't try to interpret the poem-- not just yet. Simply "translate" the poem into simpler language . Make sure the phrasing of the poem makes complete sense to you before moving on to the next step. • Identify the speaker: What is he/she going through? What is he/she experiencing? Connotation • Connotation: an idea or feeling that a word evokes in addition to its literal meaning. • Look for words which – Cause an emotional or strong reaction in the reader (YOU!) – “Stand out” because of unusual usage – Appear to be related to the title or subject of the poem Attitude • Reflect on the connotation of the words. Let's say you're reading a poem about dogs. If words and phrases such as "wagging tail," "eager," "loyal," and "man's best friend" are used, you'd probably assume that the speaker has a positive attitude toward the subject. They like dogs. Imagine, however, that none of those words are in the poem-- instead, it contains "slobbering," "noisy," "smelly," and "obnoxious barking." In that case, it would be a better guess that the speaker is not so fond of dogs. accusatory-charging of wrong doing by injustice order to make a point, teach 2. apathetic-indifferent due to lack of 24. intimate-very familiar 45. sincere-without deceit or pretense; energy or concern 25. judgmental-authoritative and often genuine 3. awe-solemn wonder having critical opinions 46. solemn-deeply earnest, tending toward sad reflection 4. bitter-exhibiting strong animosity as 26. jovial-happy a result of pain or grief 47. sanguineous -optimistic, cheerful 27. lyrical-expressing a poet’s inner 5. cynical-questions the basic sincerity feelings; emotional; full of images; song- 48. whimsical-odd, strange, fantastic; fun and goodness of people like 6. condescension; condescending-a 28. matter-of-fact--accepting of feeling of superiority conditions; not fanciful or emotional 7. callous-unfeeling, insensitive to 29. mocking-treating with contempt or feelings of others ridicule 8. contemplative-studying, thinking, 30. morose-gloomy, sullen, surly, reflecting on an issue despondent 9. critical-finding fault 31. malicious-purposely hurtful 10. choleric-hot-tempered, easily angered 32. objective-an unbiased view-able to 11. contemptuous-showing or feeling that leave personal judgments aside something is worthless or lacks respect 33. optimistic-hopeful, cheerful 12. caustic-intense use of sarcasm; 34. obsequious-polite and obedient in stinging, biting order to gain something 13. conventional-lacking spontaneity, 35. patronizing-air of condescension originality, and individuality 36. pessimistic-seeing the worst side of 14. disdainful-scornful things; no hope 15. didactic-author attempts to educate or instruct the reader 37. quizzical-odd, eccentric, amusing 16. derisive-ridiculing, mocking 38. ribald-offensive in speech or gesture 17. earnest-intense, a sincere state of 39. reverent-treating a subject with honor mind and respect 18. erudite-learned, polished, scholarly 40. ridiculing-slightly contemptuous 19. fanciful-using the imagination banter; making fun of 20. forthright-directly frank without 41. reflective-illustrating innermost hesitation thoughts and emotions 21. gloomy-darkness, sadness, rejection 42. sarcastic-sneering, caustic 22. haughty-proud and vain to the point 43. sardonic-scornfully and bitterly of arrogance sarcastic 23. indignant-marked by anger aroused 44. satiric-ridiculing to show weakness in 1. Shifts • Identifying the shifts in a poem can reveal multiple attitudes, themes or even speakers. • A shift is characterized most often by a change in mood or tone, but here are some things to look for when searching for shifts: – -A new stanza – -Transition words (but, yet, however) – -Changes in diction – -Change in speaker – -Unusual punctuation Title (Again) • it's time to re-examine the title. Before, it was only a surface-level interpretation; now, you can apply all of your analysis of the poem to a new and more in-depth interpretation of the title. • Think about the following: – Look over your original guess/interpretation and see if you still agree. If not, what are the differences in the surface meaning and deeper meaning? Is there use of an extended metaphor? – Does the title utilize any kind of poetic devices (ex. alliteration, allusion, metaphor) which add to the meaning of the poem? – In the context of the poem, does the title suggest a possible theme? Theme • A theme is best stated in sentence form-- "love" can be a theme but it is not specific at all. Instead, "love conquers all" would be a more detailed and acceptable theme. • To identify the theme, look over all of your analysis and find the connecting threads: -What's the subject? -Who is the speaker, what situation are they in, and how do they feel about the subject? -Is there more than one speaker or attitude toward the subject? Why? -How does the poet's use of diction (word choice) and other poetic devices help the reader better understand the poem? THE SECOND COMING Turning and turning in the widening gyre The falcon cannot hear the falconer; Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold; Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world, The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere The ceremony of innocence is drowned; The best lack all conviction, while the worst Are full of passionate intensity. Surely some revelation is at hand; Surely the Second Coming is at hand. The Second Coming! Hardly are those words out When a vast image out of Spiritus Mundi Troubles my sight: a waste of desert sand; A shape with lion body and the head of a man, A gaze blank and pitiless as the sun, Is moving its slow thighs, while all about it Wind shadows of the indignant desert birds. The darkness drops again but now I know That twenty centuries of stony sleep Were vexed to nightmare by a rocking cradle, And what rough beast, its hour come round at last, Slouches towards Bethlehem to be born? The Perception of Africans • By writing Things Fall Apart, Chinua Achebe hoped to change the way people thought of Africans and African culture. • Africans in tribal societies were seen as “childlike people living in a primitive society” and depicted as “violent savages with passionate instincts and simple minds.” • He wrote as an insider, someone who had experienced and wanted to share the “richness and complexity of traditional African society.” (Norton Anthology of World Literature) In case you can’t read the ad, it says: “The first step towards lightening the white man’s burden is through teaching the virtues of cleanliness. Pears’ Soap is a potent factor in heightening the dark corners of the earth as civilization advances, while amongst the cultured of all nations it holds the highest place—it is the ideal toilet soap. • Kipling1865/Bur1899DetJou320.gif