Persuasive Speech Persuasive Speech Planning Document/Outline Prepare a detailed speech complete sentence outline, including a purpose, introduction, body, conclusion, reference list with a minimum of four credible sources in APA style, and attach a copy of annotated articles planned for use in the speech. .com sites must use the CRAP test. Due: _________ Outline, visual aid, and speech giving due on date provided, no exceptions. Persuasive Speech Prepare and present a persuasive speech on a topic appropriate for your class. Use four high quality sources. Use a professional presentation style. Use a prepared audio and/or visual aid. Use a variety of types of strong, persuasive support. Length of the speech should be 5 minutes, including 3 minutes for a question and answer discussion period. Delivery needs to support message, use extemporaneous delivery, and employs sufficient volume so easily heard. Due: _________ Speech to Persuade Objectives: (a) Demonstrate research skills using a high-quality, scholarly database (b) Organize ideas in a purposeful, cohesive sequence which meets audience expectations and needs (c) Organize content into seamless, easy-to-follow introduction, body, and conclusion. (d) Create and present an effective persuasive message to a target audience I Demonstrate effective informative communication in a public context (f) Effectively support ideas using evidence, sources, and sensory aids. Synthesize information from 4+ high quality sources and orally cite those sources during the speech. Topic: ________________________ General purpose: To persuade Behavioral outcome: When I finish my speech, each audience member will be persuaded to ___________________________________________________________________. Specific purpose: To persuade the class that/to _________________________________________________________(topic or key ideas). The visual aid I will use is: _________________________________________________. Speech Outline Attention: Gain Audience Attention. You can demonstrate emotion, give a startling statistic, a fascinating projected photograph, or a provocative quotation can work. Longer attention grabbers include jokes and dramatic stories. Attention-grabbing should also move us toward interest. If you let your passion come through, and you demonstrate caring toward us—your audience—the motivation will be much easier. I. Introduction: A. Attention device (provocative quotation or a startling statement) B. Statement to establish good will – Tell listeners have you have good intentions. C. Statement of common ground – You are either on the same page or not (use survey in class) Persuasive Speech D. Statement to build speaker credibility –You have researched and are knowledgeable; you could share a quotation from an expert here too. E. Statement of the behavioral objective II. Body of Speech A. Need: Trigger a need that each listener has. A stimulated need leads to the person seeking a solution. Write the need as a complete-sentence statement (cite source author, year) 1. Use at least two pieces of supporting material (Logos): statistics, story, analogy, example, description, testimony from an expert, audio-visual aid, etc. Cite the source’s author and year in parenthesis after each (author, year) 2. X B. Satisfaction. This is not about creating satisfaction, but proposing a way in which satisfaction may be gained by meeting the need that you have just stimulated. Solve the problem we have. According to research, fear appeals do not work unless you can guide us to an appropriate response. This can be a step by step solution you provide. 1. X 2. X C. Visualization: Now that you have proposed a solution, the next step is to move the listener to see it as the right answer for them to meet their need. Help us picture in our minds how we can put the solution in place. Help us see your proposal as complete and successful. Be descriptive and paint a picture so we can see ourselves actually doing some specific behaviors. Give a hypothetical situation if you want. To motivate the audience, help us to see ourselves actually doing what you propose. By staying narrow and focused, this becomes easier. Write the visualization step as a complete-sentence statement 1. X 2. X III. Conclusion Action: Finally, you need to prompt the person into action, implementing the solution that you both now know is the right thing to do. A. Restatement. In conclusion, today, I talked about our needs regarding X, and showed you how you can meet your needs through X B. Make it memorable. C. Clincher. Now, I am calling you to act. You can X. References: (You will need four solid sources including non-internet source. Write in APA style and turn in annotated notes.) Use a library scholarly databases, books, or credible Web pages. Persuasive Speech Visual Aid Requirements: Videos may only take up 1 minute and be cited on reference page PPTs must be at least 5 slides; photos must also be given credit by listing the link underneath APA references or in the student PPT Websites must reference at least 3 areas Objects must be directly related and referred to at least 3 times Food must be directly tied to speech and explained Speech Planning Documents Grading Rubric Desired Outcomes 1. Planning documents submitted on time (on due date before the speech round). 2. Topic and motivational for assignment & audience__. Be careful about sensitive nature of topic___. Need to more carefully adapt to audience___. May want to broaden topic area___. May want to narrow topic area___. 3. Outline uses Monroe’s Motivated Sequence) ___. Ideas grouped together effectively Complete sentences make ideas clear Effective introduction (Attention) Effective conclusion (Action appeal) 4. Variety of supporting materials. Need to develop supporting materials more___. Use a variety of support___. 5. Reference list in APA style with parenthetical citations in the outline___. Need reference list___. Need APA style for references (1) ___ Citations (1) ___. Cite sources in parenthetical style in your outline___. 6. Four quality, credible sources including one non-internet Need: Higher quality___. More sources: ___. 7. Annotated copy of each source. (At least 4) Outline Requirements Typed Double spaced References cited within outline Include a title Include a reference page correctly formatted in APA Points 2 Earned 2 4 4 6 6 8 Total ______ / 32 Persuasive Speech Listener Feedback Form Communicator: Listener: Purpose statement: Did the speaker get the audience’s attention and clearly indicate the purpose of the speech in the introduction? Yes No Did the speaker bridge—make a transition—to the body of the speech? Yes No Did the organization of the speech help the listener understand the sender’s purpose? Yes No Did the speaker support his or her purpose with explanations and examples? Yes No Did the conclusion leave the audience with the speaker’s basic purpose? Yes No Did the speaker adapt his or her presentation to the audience (subject, language, audience interest, etc.)? Yes No Describe the nonverbal elements of this speech and how they helped get the message across: What are two items the speaker should work on? Questions to ask during Q&A: 1. 2. Persuasive Speech Student’s Post-performance Feedback Speaker: _____________________________ Directions: Read each statement; then, in the space provided, use numbers to indicate your feelings about the behavior described. If you are unable to respond to a statement, consider the audience feedback you observed and your feelings while giving and immediately following the speech. 4—Strongly agree _____ 1. _____ 2. _____ 3. _____ 4. _____ 5. _____ 6. _____ 7. _____ 8. _____ 9. _____ 10. _____ 11. _____ 12. _____ 13. _____ 14. _____ 15. _____ 16. _____ 17. _____ 18. _____ 19. _____ 20. _____ 21. _____ 22. _____ 23. _____ 24. 3—Agree 2—Disagree 1—Strongly disagree The topic suited the audience. The speech suited the setting. The speech suited me and my knowledge. I gained the audience’s attention with the introduction. I provided the audience with necessary background. I provided a clear statement of purpose. I used a clear pattern of arrangement for the body of the speech. The logical appeals were expected by and acceptable to the audience. The major points were well supported. I used vivid descriptions, exciting words, and personal involvement statements. I began the conclusion by summarizing the information presented during the discussion. I concluded the speech by driving home the point(s). My presentational outline was clear and provided me the opportunity to speak spontaneously. The speech was enhanced by my selection of appropriate supplementary aids. The speech was enhanced by the method I used to present the selected supplementary aids. My delivery contained very few verbal distracters. My delivery contained very few nonverbal distracters. My grammar was appropriate to the audience, the purpose, and the setting. My word choice was appropriate to the audience, the purpose, and the setting. My physical movements contributed to my being perceived as dynamic and sociable. My vocal variety contributed to my being perceived as dynamic and sociable. My eye contact was direct and consistent. I achieved the objectives I set for the presentation. The question-and-answer session was effective. What are two things that you think you did especially well in this speech? What are two things that you did not do as well as you would have liked in this speech? What do you plan to do before your next speech to improve on the two areas that you identified in question 2? Persuasive Speech Persuasive Speech Rubric Name _____________________________________________________________ 5 Organization & format Formal outline Conventions Fully developed outline Reference list Sources cited within Ideas & Organization Attention-Getter Good will Common ground Credibility Behavioral objective Ideas Body II Need Ideas Body III Satisfaction Ideas Body IV Visualization Q&A Session Ideas & Organization Conclusion Restated thesis Summary body Call to Action/ Sealer Ideas Research Evidence, support Verbal citations TIME:___________ 4 3 Period: ___________ 2 Followed proper format on outline; all components completed effectively as described in packet Two or more components of the outline are missing or are incomplete Missing multiple components; too many conventions errors that affect readability; outline not fully developed Outline not completed effectively enough to qualify as “final” outline; outline not revised from draft Used appropriate attention-getter; connected to the speech topic; contained tie to involve audience Did not fully grab audience’s attention; tie to audience weak or missing Very weak attention-getter and tie to audience; shows lack of planning and practice No attention getter; no tie to audience Employs methods of persuasion using logos for support; argument clearly explained with current status of issue Logic of arguments is apparent; all elements are present and clear, but may not be effective due to insufficient argument and history Parts of argument are confusing or unexplained; lack of effectiveness due to the absence of key elements Argument lacks logic or has insufficient evidence; ineffective argument Clearly explained with support; contains current solutions and possible future solutions All elements are present and clear, but may not be effective due to insufficient evidence Parts of argument are confusing or unexplained; lack of effectiveness due to the absence of key elements Argument lacks logic or has insufficient evidence; ineffective argument Clearly explained with support; contains effects of the problem and evidence (facts, statistics, etc.) Led audience in an effective discussion of speech; prompted questioning; asked questions in lieu of silence All elements are present and clear, but may not be effective due to insufficient analysis Parts of argument are confusing or unexplained; lack of effectiveness due to the absence of key elements Very weak prompting of audience questioning and discussion Argument lacks logic or has insufficient evidence; ineffective argument All components present and effective Attempts to restate and summarize; has a weak call to action and/or sealer for speech. Two or more components ineffective, but attempted Conclusion not attempted; shows lack of planning and practice Empirical and anecdotal evidence used effectively; cited sources 6 times during speech Outline is revised. Empirical and anecdotal evidence used, but could be more effectively; cited sources 5-4 times during the speech. Outline has 12 errors. Relies on anecdotal evidence; cited source(s) 1 time during speech. Outline has 3+ errors. Anecdotal and/or empirical evidence unclearly connected to thesis. Outline not revised. Did not fully prepare for the Q&A with questions; prompted some questioning No attempt to engage audience in questioning or discussion You will revise your outline before speaking and turn in TOTAL POINTS:___________/ 40 x 2 = __________/ points after giving your your 80 notecards speech – remember not to write a full manuscript on them! Persuasive Speech TIME: __________________ TOTAL POINTS: _______________/30 x 2 = ___________/ 60 points 5 Voice 4 3 2 Easily heard and understood by ENTIRE audience; enthusiasm is shown Most words understandable; can be heard most of the time. Moments of enthusiasm could use more practice. Some words unclear, mumbled or slurred; Sometimes difficult to hear; Sometimes monotone Difficult to understand, inaudible, and/or monotone Looks at entire audience with confidence; can see eyes at all times Does not read speech Looks at most of the audience; a little too much reading from outline Looks up and down frequently in attempt to make eye contact; shows lack of practice Little or no eye contact Never turns back to audience; posture and gestures are firm but natural, not stiff Never turns back to audience; posture may falter slightly; gestures are natural with minor fidgeting Posture and gestures are lacking confidence but not totally distracting Postures and gestures are distracting; leans on podium or whiteboard; major fidgeting On time. Over or under by seconds. Under or over time by one minute Visual Aid Visual aid was appropriate length and supported thesis Appearance Professional attire and overall composure is appropriate and effective for presentation Visual aid did not completely support argument or was lacking in length Attempts to appear professional and composed for presentation but effort is not fully executed CONTENT ____________/80 Volume Tone Articulation/ inflection Eye Contact Scans entire audience Confident Gestures and Body Movement Natural gestures Firm posture Time Length Technology NONVERBAL + ____________/60 TOTAL = ____________/140 points Under or over time by two minutes Under or over time by three minutes or more Visual aid was weak in support of evidence; not correct format No technology Clothing was not distracting but did not show a professional demeanor. Clothing was inappropriate or unprofessional and proved to be a deterrent from the presentation. Persuasive Speech CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.11-12.1 Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RI.11-12.1 Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text, including determining where the text leaves matters uncertain. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.11-12.1.C Propel conversations by posing and responding to questions that probe reasoning and evidence; ensure a hearing for a full range of positions on a topic or issue; clarify, verify, or challenge ideas and conclusions; and promote divergent and creative perspectives. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.11-12.4 Present information, findings, and supporting evidence, conveying a clear and distinct perspective, such that listeners can follow the line of reasoning, alternative or opposing perspectives are addressed, and the organization, development, substance, and style are appropriate to purpose, audience, and a range of formal and informal tasks. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.11-12.5 Make strategic use of digital media (e.g., textual, graphical, audio, visual, and interactive elements) in presentations to enhance understanding of findings, reasoning, and evidence and to add interest. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.11-12.6 Adapt speech to a variety of contexts and tasks, demonstrating a command of formal English when indicated or appropriate. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.11-12.7 Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects to answer a question (including a self-generated question) or solve a problem; narrow or broaden the inquiry when appropriate; synthesize multiple sources on the subject, demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation.