Point of View How Much Do You Know? What Is Point of View? Point of view is the vantage point from which a writer tells a story. •Every story has a narrator, who may be a character in the story or an outside observer. •The narrator provides the only information readers have about the characters, events, and places in a story. •The amount of information given depends on the narrator’s point of view. Points of View The three main points of view are •first person •third person limited •omniscient First-Person Point of View •In first-person point of view, the narrator is one of the characters. •The first-person narrator •uses first-person pronouns (I, we) •participates in the action of the story •tells only what he or she knows •may lack objectivity or perception about events or other characters in the story •may be an unreliable source of information First-Person Point of View •A first-person narrator may be unreliable for many reasons. He or she may •be naïve or unaware of important information •present a dishonestly flattering self-portrait by omitting or altering some events •be mentally disturbed or otherwise impaired •When reading a first-person narrative, watch for signs that the narrator’s version of events disagrees with what actually happened in the story. First-Person Point of View As my father maneuvers the car out of the parking lot, I tell myself he might be ill, mentally ill, even though I have never detected anything wrong beyond his prison nightmares. I am trying to piece it together, this sudden yet familiar picture of a parent’s vulnerability. When I was ten years old and my father had the chicken pox, I overheard him say to a friend on the phone, “The doctor tells me that at my age chicken pox can kill a man.” This was the first time I realized that my father could die. I looked up the word kill in every dictionary and encyclopedia at school, trying to comprehend what it meant, that my father could be eradicated from my life. from “The Book of the Dead” by Edwidge Danticat From “The Book of the Dead” by Edwidge Danticat. Copyright © 1999 by Edwidge Danticat. Originally published in The New Yorker, June 1999. Reproduced by permission of Edwidge Danticat and Aragi Inc. Third-Person-Limited Point of View •In third-person-limited point of view, the narrator is outside the story but zooms in to focus on the thoughts and feelings of one character in the story. •The third-person-limited narrator •uses third-person pronouns (she, they) •plays no part in the story’s action •tells only what the chosen character knows Third-Person-Limited Point of View Light flashed on her closed eyelids, and a deep roaring shook her. Cornelia, is that lightning? I hear thunder. There’s going to be a storm. Close all the windows. Call the children in. . . . “Mother, here we are, all of us.” “Is that you, Hapsy?” “Oh, no, I’m Lydia. We drove as fast as we could.” Their faces drifted above her, drifted away. The rosary fell out of her hands and Lydia put it back. Jimmy tried to help, their hands fumbled together, and Granny closed two fingers around Jimmy’s thumb. Beads wouldn’t do, it must be something alive. She was so amazed her thoughts ran round and round. So, my dear Lord, this is my death and I wasn’t even thinking about it. My children have come to see me die. But I can’t, it’s not time. from “The Jilting of Granny Weatherall” by Katherine Anne Porter “The Jilting of Granny Weatherall” from Flowering Judas and Other Stories by Katherine Anne Porter. Copyright 1930 and renewed © 1958 by Katherine Anne Porter. Reproduced by permission of The Permissions Company on behalf of Barbara Thompson Davis, Literary Trustee for Katherine A. Porter. Omniscient Point of View •In the omniscient point of view, the narrator is outside the story but knows what all the characters are thinking and feeling as well as what is happening in other places. •The omniscient narrator •uses third-person pronouns (she, them) •is not part of the story’s action •can tell readers about the motives, weaknesses, hopes, childhoods, and futures of many characters •may comment directly on the characters’ actions Omniscient Point of View The next day, the whole village of Milford talked of little else than Parson Hooper’s black veil. That, and the mystery concealed behind it, supplied a topic for discussion between acquaintances meeting in the street, and good women gossiping at their open windows. It was the first item of news that the tavern keeper told to his guests. The children babbled of it on their way to school. One imitative little imp covered his face with an old black handkerchief, thereby so affrighting his playmates, that the panic seized himself, and he well nigh lost his wits by his own waggery.* from “The Minister’s Black Veil” by Nathaniel Hawthorne *waggery: joke. Evaluating Point of View Once you’ve identified a story’s point of view, you can evaluate what effect it has on the story. Ask yourself the following questions. •How much does the narrator know and understand? Does the narrator provide insight into characters and events? •Does the narrator remain objective? •What information might the narrator keep from readers? Why? •How would the story be different if it were told from another point of view? What Have You Learned? Match these passages with the point of view they use. Omniscient Third person limited First person _________________— Third person limited Bill glared across the room at Elsi, wondering how could she be so heartless. First person _________________— I couldn’t believe she was sitting there ignoring me. I held my gaze, willing her to look up at me. _________________— Omniscient Elsi wished Bill would look away. She didn’t want to hurt his feelings. Bill was determined to meet her eye, though. He wanted her to acknowledge him. The End