Lesson 1 Handout 2-KEY English II TEACHER KEY FOR ASSIGNMENT Name_________________________________________________________ Period____________________________ Date_____________________ Annotating/Close Reading/Lesson: Fahrenheit 451 Guiding Question: What do our customs and beliefs reveal about us as a society? Word Part or Context Clue? Page or Paragraph Page or Paragraph Part 1:Vocabulary Denotative and Connotative Vocabulary Denotative and Connotative Vocabulary Word Part or Context Clue? #2 changed CC – “eaten,” “blackened” #3 singed CC – “driven back by flame” #2 stolid CC – “ eyes all orange flame,” “he flicked the igniter” #4 minstrel CC – 1) “hands the hands of some amazing conductor” 2) “burnt-corked in the mirror” Quote: “It was a special pleasure to see things…changed.” Def: to make the form, nature, or course of something different from what it is or should be Quote: “With his symbolic helmet numbered 451 on his stolid head, and his eyes all orange flame…” Def: unemotional; not easily stirred or moved mentally Quote: “Montag grinned the fierce grin of all men singed and driven back by flame.” Def: to burn superficially or slightly Quote: “…he might wink at himself, a minstrel man…” Def: 1)medieval musician 2) comedian with black face make-up performing a skit Part 2: Annotation Before annotating, you must have a focus or purpose. This is often provided through a prompt. Read and mark the following prompt before reading the passage. Prompt: In the following excerpt from Fahrenheit 451, Ray Bradbury introduces a society unlike our own. Write an essay in which you analyze how Bradbury uses patterns of language in this passage to reveal the customs and beliefs of this society. Marking the prompt: In the second sentence of the prompt, underline the concrete elements (the devices); box the abstract ideas or concepts (tone, mood, purpose, theme, etc) Reading #1 – Follow along on your text while the excerpt is read aloud. Reading #2 – Using the subject matter of the prompt as your guide, mark your text when you find examples of your assigned literary device and marking technique. Circle the device you are assigned: diction, imagery, details, sound devices (assonance, consonance, alliteration, onomatopoeia), comparisons (metaphor, simile, personification), symbols, syntax (sentence patterns and structure), repetition, plot/conflict, irony, and characters. This may take 2-3 readings to find your examples. Part 3: Guided Reading Notes –the key offers suggestions as evidence but is not limited to what is provided After you have annotated your paper, discuss among the other students who were also assigned your device what pattern that particular device reveals about the customs and beliefs of this society. Come to a consensus and then write your insight in the chart below. Aim for three entries per device unless directed otherwise. Groups will then share their findings with the class. Device Evidence Insight into the customs and beliefs of society Diction Word choice; 1-2 words each; group in 3s “burn,” “blackened,” “kerosene,” “tatters,” “charcoal ruins,” “orange flame,” “igniter,” “fire,” “red,” “yellow,” “black,” “furnace,” “died,” “dark,” “singed,” “fiery smile,” This list of fire and burning words reveals that this society thrives on fire and the use of it as a means of destruction is commonplace. “stolid” Stolid means “unemotional; not easily stirred mentally.” This reveals that the firemen are so accustomed to such acts of violence, that it doesn’t affect them any longer. It also shows the level of brainwashing that has taken place for a fireman not to question the act of burning rather than saving. “minstrel” “It was a special pleasure to see things eaten, to see things blackened and changed.” Imagery 5 senses: see, hear, taste, smell, touch Details Facts, observations, incidents which impart voice *Sound “bring down the tatters and charcoal ruins of history” “gorging fire that burned the evening sky red and yellow and black” “It was a pleasure to burn.” This statement sums up the feelings of the firemen; they enjoy the destruction they cause. The reader doesn’t understand why at this point, but it is glaringly obvious from the first sentence that this society is quite different from our own. “It never went away, that smile, it never ever went away, as long as he remembered.” In this first short passage, the reader can infer that the firemen of this society have been so brainwashed that they take great pleasure from causing the destruction that comes with their job. These harsh and noisy words represent the sounds and actions heard at the large fire; the fireman is enjoying the destruction. Onomatopoeia – “spitting,” “flicked,” “flapping,” “blazing” Alliteration, assonance, consonance, onomatopoeia Consonance – “the brass nozzle in his fists, with this great python spitting its venomous kerosene upon the world” (CompariSons) Metaphor – hose to a “great python”; kerosene to “venomous kerosene”; fireman’s hands to “hands of some amazing conductor”; books to “tatters and charcoal ruins of history”; eyes to “orange flame”; ashes of books to “swarm of fireflies”; books to “pigeon-winged books” Simile, metaphor, personification, allusion Symbols Personification – “house jumped up”; “books died” “451” “books” {Syntax} Author’s style, sentence structure, voice √Repetition of words, phrases, sentences Plot/ Conflict ∼∼∼∼∼ 1 Example Irony ! A minstrel is a “medieval musician or a black face make-up comedian who performs a skit.” The relates to Montag on two levels. First, he is metaphorically described as a conductor destroying history by fire. Just as the Middle Ages is also known as the Dark Ages for its lack and destruction of knowledge, it is appropriate that Montag would be compared to such. He is also playing out a role for the government, so in that vein, he is performing a skit. He is also covered in soot, giving him a black face as if he has been painted. These images reveal that this society is brainwashed into believing that knowledge is dangerous and must be destroyed. It is obvious that this ideology has been practiced for some time for the firemen to not only accept this as correct, but to also derive pleasure from it. The reader also realizes that this society’s government must fear the knowledge to be found in books, as it compares burning books to destroying history. firemen “changed” “It was a pleasure to burn.” 2nd Sentence of 2nd Paragraph “With the brass nozzle…ruins of history.” The “s” sound being repeated in these words represents the metaphorical python’s hissing as it destroys what it sprays its venom on. These metaphors and personification jointly portray this society as one which thrives on the destruction of knowledge. Here, knowledge learned throughout the course of history is referred to as “tatters” and “ruins” to prove that keeping the population in darkness and ignorance through the use of fear is the goal. From the outset of the novel, the reader can infer that society is led by a totalitarian government. These three symbols tie together in that the firemen symbolize the destruction of knowledge (symbolized by the books) and this destruction takes place at a certain Fahrenheit – 451 degrees. The author brings significance to the word “changed” by italicizing it. “Changed” means to make the form, nature, or course of something different from what it is or should be. In this context, society has been changed for the worse as it thrives on seeing things “blackened” or “eaten.” This simple sentence is also passive voice and 3 rd Person Omniscient. The sentence is general and then moves to the specific in the passage. It simply states that the firemen derive pleasure from destruction. Just as there is no further explanation needed in his mind, there are also no further questions about why he must do such things. Being written in passive voice and 3rd person creates a sense of detachment between both the fireman and his prey and the reader and the fireman. Their indoctrination into this belief system prevents further probing by the reader. “pleasure,” “pleasure” “grinned,” “grin,” “smile,” “smile” This is a periodic sentence in which the parallel phrases and clauses at the beginning of the sentence build to the main independent clause at the end. This structure mimics the movements of the “python” as it writhes to bring down “history.” These repeated words embody the mindless firemen who routinely destroy without question and take pleasure from inflicting pain on those who oppose their government. “went away,” “went away” “It was a pleasure to see things burn. It was a special pleasure to see things eaten, to see things blackened and changed.” The first two sentences portray this society as sadistic where those in power enjoy inflicting pain and destruction upon those who vary from the expected norm. “brass nozzle…spitting its venomous kerosene” One would expect a fireman to smile about saving something from a fire, not from using kerosene in his hose to destroy it. The fact that he is drawing pleasure from watching things die reveals how corrupted this society is. “He wanted…to shove a marshmallow on a stick…while the …books died” “going to sleep, he would feel the fiery smile still gripped by his face muscles” [Characterization] “He wanted…to shove a marshmallow on a stick…while the …books died” “Montag grinned the fierce grin of all men singed and driven back by flame.” “going to sleep, he would feel the fiery smile still gripped by his face muscles” Montag represents the brainwashed segment of this totalitarian society. He not only performs his actions out of duty, but also out of pleasure. It pleases him to destroy what he does not value. SUMMATIVE ASSESSMENT ANSWER KEY 1. ad 2. bd 3. e 4. ae 5. b 6. bd 7. a 8. d 9. be 10. ac 11. b 12. c 13. a 14. c 15. a