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Golden Review

AP Language and Composition

Benjamin Adickes

May 2010

Table of Contents

I. Truth

1) Jostein Gaarder i.

Sophie’s World

2) Plato i.

Allegory of the Cave

3) Marie Winn i.

Television: The Plug-In Drug

4) Jean-Paul Sartre i.

Existentialism

5) Stephanie Ericsson i.

The Ways We Lie

6) Stephen L. Carter i.

Insufficiency of Honesty

7) Noetic Science

II. Beauty

1) Jean Killbourne i.

Killing Us Softly 3

2) Susan Sontag i.

A Woman’s Beauty: Put-Down or Power Source?

3) Angela Carter i.

The Wound in the Face

4) Mandohla Dargis i.

A World Where Truth Turns Out Not To Be

Beauty

5) Emily Prager

i.

Our Barbies, Ourselves

6) Alice Walker i.

Beauty: When the Other Dancer Is the Self

III. Politics

1) Yevgeny Zamyatin i.

On Literature, Revolution, Entropy, and Other

Matters

2) George Orwell i.

Politics and the English Language ii.

Freedom and Happiness iii.

Shooting an Elephant

IV. Essay Help

1) Focus: Rhetoric

2) Focus: Analysis a) Francine Prose i.

Close Reading b) Reading essays/ commentary

3) Focus: Writing a) General b) Analysis paper c) Synthesis paper d) Help with argument

4) Focus: Satire

5) Focus: Fallacies

V. Golden Lines/Terms

Truth

Jostein Gaarder:

 Sophie’s World o Terms

Agnostic: someone who is unable to say categorically whether or not god/gods exist

Cultural optimism: the generally accepted view during the enlightenment movement that once reason and knowledge became widespread, humanity would make great progress; irrationalism and ignorance would make way for an enlightened humanity

Determinism: if an intelligence had known the positions of all particles of matter, nothing would be unknown

Empiricism: Nothing exists in the memory before experiencing it through the senses

Epicureanism: the pursuit of pleasure (good) to avoid pain

(bad), but actions must be weighed against possible consequences

Fatalism: whatever happens is predestined

Golden Mean: Balance in human relationships

Idealism: everything is fundamentally a perfect image and spiritual in nature

Law of Causality: the natural human tendency to casually link natural processes together because of an innate view of everything as a matter of cause and effect

Materialism: Democritus’ antithetical view of idealism

Skepticism: sophist view that regardless of philosophical answers, man cannot possible know the truth about riddles of nature and the universe o Philosophers:

Aristotle: (384-322 BC) used senses in tandem with reasoning; refused Plato’s “idea” forms.

 Golden Mean

Berkeley, George: (1685-1753) Irish bishop philosopher, tied Christianity to philosophy

 Material ideas had a spiritual cause beyond conscience

Democritus: (460-730 BC) last of great natural philosophers

 Eternal legos

 Descartes, Renée : (1596-1650) Concerned himself with achieving insight into the nature of man and the universe, but became more conscious of his ignorance

 “Cognito, ergo sum”

Grottfried von Herder, Johann: (1744-1803) opposed linear history; favored history that evolves, continues, develops

Hegel, George Wilhelm Friedrich: (1770-1831) world spirit defined by humans and their history

 “Truth is subjective”

 “Dialectic process”: thesis, antithesis, synthesis

 Dynamic reasoning

Heraclitus: (540-480 BC) believed constant change was the most basic characteristic of nature

 “Everything flows”/ Heraclitian flux

Hume, David: (1711-1776) Considdered to be the most important empiricist, focused on the everyday instead of big abstract ideas; focused on the viewpoint of children.

Kant, Immanuel: (1724-1804) first university philosophy professor, taught that everything that senses and reasoning fail to explain or answer must be left to faith

 “Das ding an sich”

 “Never treat anyone simply as a means, but also as an end”

Locke, John: (1632-1704) empirical philosopher who believed that before perceptions, a person is a clean slate.

 “Tabula Rasa”

Protagoras: (485-410 BC) believed the ‘right-ness’ of something must be in relation to a person’s needs

 “Man is the measure of all things”

Socrates: (470-399 BC) Largest influence on European thought. Used discussions and debates as teaching tools.

Put to death for asking too many questions.

Baruch Spinoza: (1632-1677) powerful speaker in relation to free speech and religious tolerance. His views earned him an excommunication from the Jewish community

 Pantheism: God is all, all is in God

 Kierkegaard, Sørn

 Significance of the individual

 Existentialism

Plato:

 Allegory of the Cave o People are shackled in a cave of pretenses (“shadows”)

 Real light hurts eyes, so they slowly progress: shadows, then reflections, then real objects

 More willing to accept real objects at night because they appear closer to their original reality

 After accepting “true” reality, they pity their friends still in the cave o Upbringing helps determine how focused a person is inward

o Man’s struggle for ultimate truth is always an uphill battle

 World is to cave as sunlight is to firelight

 (cave shadows  earthly objects  divine “idea of the good”) o Most “virtues” are actually learned through habits and practices, but the virtue of understanding is divine because it is useful and helpful o Things that require intelligent observation are things that cause the senses to fail to produce a sound result

Marie Winn:

 Television: the Plug-in Drug o Not necessarily a problem if parents raise kids correctly o Misinterpreted as a “cure-all”, but it isn’t

 Stagnates and ferments problems

 Takes away intimate family bonding

 Diminishes the quality of family bonding o TV provides a shadowlike representation of real life, distorting reality and seriously degrading the development of a child o Act of watching > what’s being watched o Strips away familial uniqueness by making families the same o Forces family interactions from interactive to parallel

Jean-Paul Sartre:

 Existentialism o Truth is personal

 Ex. Is it more ‘right’ to take care of mother or more ‘right’ to fight for a cause that may or may not take hold? o Man is responsible for his actions and how he interacts with the rest of humanity o Situational ethics/ morals o Individual actions are more important than whether or not God exists o “Man is condemned to be free.” o “If God didn’t exist, then anything would be possible.”

Stephanie Ericsson:

 The Ways We Lie o White lie

 Arrogantly deciding what is best for someone else o Façade

 Seduces one into believing an illusion o Deflecting

 Perpetuating untruths o Omission

 Changes the story by leaving out key features o Stereotype/cliché

 “Candy bar of misinformation instead of a balance meal of truth”

o Groupthink

 Loyalty to the group view trumps all else o Out-and-out lie

 Refutes a given perception of reality o Dismissal

 Rejection of truth o Delusion

 Accepting excuses as fact

 Filters out things we don’t want to believe

Stephen L Carter:

 Insufficiency of Honesty o Integrity:

 Discerning right/wrong

 Acting on that discernment

 Openly sharing/knowing you act on that decision o Integrity may involve keeping secrets to avoid harming others o Honesty ≠ Integrity

 Honesty allows us to escape moral responsibilities o Lying ≠ Nondisclosure o Most problems arise from lack of reflection, which warps our views of right/wrong o Laws have two functions:

 To tell people to do what they’d rather not or forbid them from doing what they would

Noetic Science: o Physical reality can be altered with the mind to the point where o actual changes occur in the realm of reality

Beauty

Jean Kilbourne:

 Killing Us Softly 3 o Perception and Artificiality o Feministic objectification o “You have the right to remain sexy” (advert. Slogan) o Women judged fragmentationally

Susan Sontag:

 A Woman’s Beauty: Put-Down or Power Source? o Beauty alienated to superficiality by Christianity

 Women = beautiful sex = weaker sex

 Feminine  caring about one’s looks; masculine  caring about what one is and does

o Beauty typically viewed as essential to feminine character, whereas men’s looks are secondary o The desire for beauty isn’t wrong, just the obligation/attempt o Beauty is the only form of power women are taught to seek o Preening is a womanly duty—damned if they do, damned if they don’t o Nothing less than perfection will do (but perfection is impossible)

Angela Carter:

 Wound in the Face o Theory behind makeup: it makes women more beautiful

 Advertisers don’t understand imagery any more than consumers do o Makeup styles and fashion generally reflect their mother era

 Ex. Vogue stuck in the 30’s with gaunt looks

 Ex. 60’s era defined by minimal makeup use o Makeup often used as a satire on beauty

 Mocks women, because they are used as the canvas o Sometimes looks are driven/perpetuated by men

 Ex. Interview uses flashy transvestites, causing women to want to model themselves after men who model themselves after what they think women should look like o Symbolism of makeup disappears unless colors are re-arranged

 Ex. Norm = black eyeshadow and red lipstick; Oedipal implications become apparent when eyeshadow is red and lipstick is black

Mandohla Dargis

 A World where Truth Turns Out Not to Be Beauty o Movie review of The Invention of Lying o “A world without lying is also one without art” o Lying is an outlet, a means by which we can escape reality and commonplace happenings o Truth can hurt; it tickles our inner bully

 Ex. The nursing home called ‘a sad place for hopeless old people’

Emily Prager

 Our Barbies, Ourselves o Hard edged German adult toy  doll for American girls o Paradoxically embodies both masculine and feminine traits

 Masculine:

 Not realistically proportionate

 Lacks softness and realism

 Ken doll lacking penis o Indicates dignity of concealment

 Feminine:

 Liberated/successful woman

 “Totemic”

 A 60’s girl: free love, fun colors, molded boyfriend

Alice Walker

 Beauty: When the Other Dancer Is the Self o Chronological progression from “cute” child, to scarred, to psychologically healed and coped o Plays wild-western games with brothers

 “relegated to Indian” because she was a woman and wasn’t given a BB gun

 Gets shot in the eye, goes blind o “There’s a world in your eye”

 Said by her little girl (children make the boldest philosophers)

Politics

Yevgeny Zamyatin:

 On Literature, Revolution, Entropy, and Other Maters o Entropy: Decline or degeneration o “Revolution is everywhere, in everything. It is infinite.” o Heretics are vital to humanity—they prevent man from going stagnant o Useful literature is only useful today, but harmful literature stays harmful o Children make the best philosophers because of their naïveté o “Children are the boldest philosophers” o Two kinds of people:

 Dead-alive

 Automatons, never making mistakes, never questioning

 Alive-alive

 Constantly in error, always asking questions, etc. o Errors more important than truths

 They raise questions which eventually become truths o Ordinary is comfortable, but revolution is a necessary pain

George Orwell:

 1984 ( satire) o Written as a warning to avoid total complacency and government control o Freedom of expression is severely limited (unless it’s praise of the

Party, it’s banned)

o Government turns children against parents, destroying the most basic basis for proper development o Urges are suppressed by making them less pleasant o Everything about the government (facts, figures, etc.) are either faked or ‘revised’

 “Who controls the past controls the future; who controls the present controls the past.” o The viewpoint of the superpower—like that of its two enemies—is highly insular; they choose to assume that they are the world, and as a result, the victors of the perpetuated war

 The war is just a means whereby luxuries cannot be produced, forcing everyone into submission to the government

 ‘my enemy is who my government says it is’

 The nationalism of Oceania is just sex gone sour o The intoxication of power (in this case by the government) is a real threat o True character is revealed in times of great peril o “War is peace” o “Freedom is Slavery” o “Ignorance is strength” o “Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two make four. If that is granted, all else follows.” o “Power is not a means, it is an end”

 1984 Afterword (Eric Fromm) o “Can man forget he is human?” o “How can millions be wrong?” o “How can a minority of one be right?”

 Politics and the English Language o (written from a communication standpoint, not a literary one) o Modern English prose characterized by a façade of eruditeness masking a large incompetence o Uninterested writers pervert original metaphors o Passive voice favored o Noun constructions are favored over gerunds o Simple things are made more complicated o Words often have no direct relevancy to topic o Vague descriptions have become more popular than concrete ones o Mentality: it’s more complicated, so it must be better o Four clarity questions:

 What am I trying to say?

 What words will express it?

 What image/idiom will make it clearer?

 Is this image fresh enough to have an effect? o Rules for avoiding vagueness/humbug:

 Never use a metaphor, simile or figure of speech common in print

 Choose the shorter word if it means the same thing

 Cut words out wherever possible

 Use active as much as possible

 Use everyday English instead of foreign phrases whenever possible

 Break rules 1-5 sooner than saying anything barbarous o “if thought corrupts language, language can also corrupt thought” o “if you simplify your English, you are free from the worst lies of orthodoxy”

 Freedom and Happiness o “Freedom and Happiness are incompatible”

 Shooting an Elephant o Claim: The fear of humiliation is a stronger drive than that of death o He had to shoot the elephant to avoid looking like a fool o “only an absurd puppet pushed to and fro” o “he wears a mask, and his face grows to fit it” o When white man turns tyrant, it is his own freedom that he looses

Focus: Rhetoric

The ability to use language effectively

Three Appeals

 Logos (logic)

 Pathos (emotion)

 Ethos (character)

Five canons of classical Rhetoric

 Invention

 Arrangement

 Style

 Memory

 Delivery

Focus: Analysis

Francine Prose:

 Close Reading o Creativity is a process of discovery

 Form can be taught, but creativity is up to the pupil o “Put every word and mark on trial for its life” o Learning to write well comes from writing and reading word by word o New Criticism:

 Close reading requires thinking in tandem with reading

 Close reading comes with time and practice

 Punctuation is critical in conveying a point

Reading Essays (with Living Like Weasels) : o Four acts:

Observe information, presentation, evidence, etc.

Connect to argument

Infer prepares for interpretation

Concluding ties everything to how you see it

Commentary: o Observe details o Connect details o Make inferences o Arrive at interpretation

Focus: Writing

General: o Read actively and with critical judgement o Qualities of good writing:

 Clarity

 Coherence

 Logical organizaion

 Accuracy and correctness

 Sufficiency

 Style o Vary sentence beginnings, length, structure o Should be a linguistical smoothie o Be specific o Write with an age appropriate voice

Analysis paper: o Read the prompt closely for the what, how, and why o Be Explicit o ID specific literary/rhetorical features o Look for any contextual clues o *if comparative in nature, look for contrast o Be sure to blend key words from prompt into essay

Intro: Be explicit, ID specific literary/rhetorical features and how they specificlly cause their intended effect (tone, purpose, meaning, exigence, etc.)

Body: Block x Block: Body Paragraph 1: Passage 1

Body Paragraph 2: Passage 2 (integrating contrast language)

Conclusion: Don’t be repetitive. o DIDLS:

Diction is tone—Adjectives, nouns, verbs, adverbs, synonyms, contrast, anything that stands out.

Imagery creates a strong picture that appeals to senses

Details

Language—words that describe the entire body of words in a text

Syntax

 Patterns and structures

 Construction of sentences to convey attitude

 Punctuation

Synthesis paper

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Introduction contextualizes issue for readers: why should educated informed citizens care about this topic? o Writer takes a clear position on the topic o Thesis captures complexity of the issue and focuses the writer’s position

 Writer combines sources and position to form a cohesive, well-

organized, supported argument in 2-4 paragraphs o Argument is convincing o Connection between position and sources is clearly established o Significance of sources in relation to thesis is examined o “Conversation” between writer an sources is established o at least three sources are used effectively to support the position identified n the introduction o signal phrase verbs successfully capture the intent of the source author o all sources used in the essay are properly cited

writing is effective o each paragraph contains a separate idea o General statements are supported o Explanations are clear, thorough, and accurate

Mature stylistic elements are present: o Effective diction o Some figurative language o Sentence structure variety o Detectable/ appropriate voice/tone o Few errors in spelling and mechanics

Conclusion does not summarize but address how educated, informed citizens should continue to think about the issue and how the issue will affect the reader’s lives o There are keywords in every writing prompt. Blend them into the essay. o Blend the last line of prompt into introduction o Avoid the Fallacies o Read and understand the sources

Help with argument:

 3 types of claims: o –fact: something is true vs. false o –value: something has vs. lacks value o –policy: something ought vs. ought not to be done

 Two kinds of argument: o Deductive—impossible for the premises to be true but the conclusion to be false o Inductive—premises support an argument in such a way that if both premises are true, then it’s improbable (but not impossible) that the conclusion would be false.

 Use qualifiers; they make a claim more flexible.

 More evidence presents a stronger case.

 Making concessions add believability to you overall claim.

Focus: Satire

Elements of Satire: o What: the topic or subject being ridiculed or attacked o How: Literary device (irony, parody, exaggeration, etc.) o Why: the motivation to change the teme/purpose o Effective: the ability to eval and comment on the relationship between what and how o Relevency: the ability to evaluate and comment on the relationship between what and why

 Connections to Reads, Observations, Experiences o Two kinds of satire:

 Horatian (there’s hope for humanity)

 Juvinalian (No hope for humanity)

Focus: Fallacies

1.

Begging the question: assuming something to be true that really needs proof.

 “The unsanitary condition of the slaughterhouse is detrimental to health.”

2.

Ignoring the question: shifting the argument to new ground, usually with a question irrelevant to the logic of the case.

 “You talk about apartheid in Africa. Do you know what Americans to

Indians?”

3.

Equivocation: using the same term with different meanings in the same argument.

4.

Non-sequitur (‘it does not follow’): the conclusion does not follow from the preceding arguments.

 “He doesn’t drink or smoke, so he must be a good husband.”

5.

Faulty dilemma: the major presents a choice that doesn’t exhaust all possibilities.

 “Better dead than red.”

6.

Post hoc ergo proper hoc (after this, therefore because of this): attempts to prove that a second event was a result of the first event because it followed the first event.

 “Every time democrats get into office, we have a war.”

7.

Argumentum ad hominem (argument to the man): attack on character involved.

 “He shouldn’t be elected; his father is an alcoholic.”

8.

Ad misericordiam: an appeal for sympathy.

 “The reason I stole the money is because I’m out of work, my wife got arrested, I haven’t eaten in two days…”

9.

Hypothesis contrary to fact: beginning with a premise that is not necessarily true and drawing conclusions from it.

 “If he hadn’t been my teacher, I never would have understood algebra.”

10.

Composition: arguing that a group must have the same characteristics as its members.

 “Each player is the best at his position in the entire country; therefore his team is the best in the country.”

11.

Division: arguing that an individual must have the same characteristics as the group.

 “That team is the best in the country, therefore their pitcher must be the best one in the country.”

12.

Dicto simpliciter: Argument based on unqualified generalizations.

 “Exercise is good; therefore, everyone should exercise.”

13.

Contradictory premise: The main premises contradict each other.

 “If God can do anything, can he make a stone so heavy that he can’t lift it?”

14.

Over-generalizing: too few instances presented to produce accurate conclusion.

 “Tall men like ice cream.”

15.

Premise and common ground: The terms of the premise must be accepted as true.

 “all college graduates are geniuses.”

16.

False analogy: wrongful comparisons of dissimilar situations.

 “Doctors use x-rays during surgery; therefore students should use textbooks during exams.”

17.

Ad vericundiam: appeal to a general authority.

 “My teacher said…”; “Figures prove…”

18.

Ad populum: appeal to a crowd.

 “Friends, Romans, countrymen, lend me your ears.”

19.

Self-evident truths: proceeding from an unwarranted assumption to a foregone conclusion.

 “Everybody knows…”

20.

Guilt/innocence by assosciation: use of irrelevant connections to accuse or vindicate.

 “He reads radical magazines; so he must hold the same views.”

21.

Either/or fallacy: requires absolutes which do not allow for intermediate cases.

 “Do you want to go to college or dig ditches the rest of your life?”

Golden Lines

“A mind once stretched by a new idea never gains its original dimensions”(Oliver Wendel Holmes)

“Adversity has the effect of eliciting talents which in prosperous circumstances would have lain dormant” (Horace)

“Carpe diem” (Coined durin g the Baroque Per.)

“Categorical Imperative” (Immanuel Kant)

“Children are the boldest philosophers” (Zamyatin)

“Cognito ergo sum” (Renee Descartes)

“Conscience and cowardice are really the same things” (Wilde)

“Credo quia absurdum” (Kierkegaard)

“Das ding an sich” (Immanuel Kant)

“Dialectic process”/“Thesis, antithesis, synthesis” (George F.W. Hagel)

“Esse es percepti” (Berkeley) o Two levels of perception: temporal (earthly) and spiritual (divine)

“Everything flows” (Heraclitus)

“Existence precedes essence” (Sartre)

“Freedom and happiness are incompatible” (Orwell)

“Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two make four. If that is granted, all else follows.” (Orwell)

“Harmful literature is more useful than useful literature” (Zamyatin)

“If God didn’t exist, then anything would be possible.” (Sartre)

“If you simplify your English, you are free from the worst lies of orthodoxy”

(Orwell)

“In times of deceit, telling the truth becomes a revolutionary act” (Orwell)

“Know thyself” (Above temple of Delphi)

“Knowledge is power” (Francis Bacon)

“Man is condemned to be free.” (Sartre)

“Man is the measure of all things” (Protagoras)

“Memento Mori”

“Never treat people as a means, but as an end” (Immanuel Kant)

“Power is not a means, it is an end” (Orwell)

“Real beauty ends where an intellectual expression begins” (Wilde)

“Revolution is everywhere, in everything. It is infinite” (Zamyatin)

“Sanity is not a statistical” (George Orwell)

“Some kinds of failure are better than other kinds” (Orwell)

“Tabula Rasa” (John Lock e)

“The basis of optimism is sheer terror” (Wilde)

“The commonest thing is delightful if only one hides it” (Wilde)

“The cruelest lies are often told in silence” (R.L. Stevenson)

“The lie is the spirit committing treason against itself” (Martin Buber)

“The privileges of beauty are immense” (Cocteau)

“The telling of beautiful untrue things is the proper aim of art” (Oscar

Wilde)

“The truth is rarely pure and never simple” (Twain)

“To define is to limit” (Wilde)

“War is peace…freedom is slavery…ignorance is strength” (Orwell)

“When you learn how to die, you learn how to live” (Morrie Schwartz)

“Who controls the past controls the future; who controls the present controls the past” (Orwell)

“Wilderness is more a state of mind than a fact of nature” (Emmerson)

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