Test 2 writing task 1 and 2 of IELTS 6 cambridge books for cambridge exams:
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Task 1:
The table shows the mean distance in miles of traveling in
England in two different years with a time step of 15 years.
The walking distance each person travels is almost five times of
the distance travelled by bicycle in 1985 with a slight change of
6 times in 2000.
Near 4/5 of all travelled miles belong to cars in 1985 but after
15 years the rank changed to almost 5/6.
The statistic also indicates that people tend more to use Taxi in
year 2000 than 1985 with the increasing rate of 3.
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Comment [S1]: Yoy’d better write: “four fifths”
Among all the tarnsportationtransportation means only local
bus usage shows a sharp reduction compared to 1985 but long
distance bus travelled per person is two times more in 2000.
In both years still are the cars whothat play the main role in
daily transportation of every individual. Local buses were the
second most used mode in 1985 but changed their place with
trains in 2000.
The interesting aspect in this table is that, average distance
travelled by walkingon foot, is more than bicycle and taxi.
Task 2:
In the recent century, dozendozens of new vocations come to
existence each year. Accordingly, all the job and financial
equations changed and one can not specify exactly which job
could be more beneficial than the others.
During the history of mankind, competition seems to be one of
the most prioritypriorities of human being and there are is also
some recorded history of Olympic games quite back in ancient
times in Greece.
Sports as an interesting field and quite a safe era of
competition changed his its role as a simple activity to a vast
important phenomenon in the recent decades and even
century.
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Comment [S2]: Comma needed
By increasing amount of sports fans, advertising companies
found the stadiums a powerful potential for flourishing their
goals and as the media changed their broadcasting range and
rate, bye covering more and more regions of the globe, more
money came to the field by investors.
Above all the media, TV had a very rapid impression and
success.
At the core of all these events, stood the athleticsathletes, who
were the main point and the center of all attentions. So that is
how the sport professionals came in tointo existence, who
earned just a little fraction of the money which they produced
for their clubs and investors, which is obviously a great amount
of money, compared to any other professions.
A top football player star has to participate in a long energyconsuming daily exercises and there is not any firm guaranty
for him to remain at the same step of fame and glory. They
often face sport injuries which perish them from the field.
In order to become a successful sport player, one had to
sacrifice his life, family and the best period of his life. Many of
them have severe serious family problems and face a different
world after their retirement and it would be their first death.
It remains always a dilemma: choosing professional sports as
vocation with their own troubles or having a normal life.
Estimated bandscore : 7
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