REFLECTIVE MEMO
My revision choices were made based on your suggestions. I did delete some of the
job responsibilities from my current job and add some to the second job listed. I also
added some meat to the reflective memos and looked back at the grading criteria like
you suggested. I summarized the principal steps in a paragraph at the beginning and
end of the process description. I proofread the job materials memo to see if the “its”
were clear to the reader and adjusted them accordingly. I added more elaboration on
the correspondence memo to express how I felt I had done on the assignment.
I added headings to my job materials memo. I also added a concluding statement. In
the reflective memo for the job materials I tried to add more information to situate
you as the reader and give some background. I need to work more on design choices
for this assignment.
One of my weaknesses was writing the reflective memos. Since that was the last
thing I did for each assignment, they tended to be short and sweet. My strength was
that fact that I have done some of these things in my current job and I like to do these
kinds of things. My main obstacle is just coming up with an idea. My brain is really
slow. If I had taken this class during a regular semester, I think my work would have
been much better.
I’m glad we did the job materials assignment since I will be graduating soon and may
have to look for another job. I needed to prepare a new résumé. There were not any
assignments that I felt were especially difficult. I thought the process description was
hard, but I guess I did okay after all. I’m most proud of the group proposal. Our
groupwas
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What revision choices did you make for each item in the portfolio?
o What are your greatest strengths and weaknesses for each item?
o What problems or obstacles did you experience when creating each item?
What is your overall assessment of each item in the portfolio and its
development?
o Which item are you most proud of?
o Which item are you least proud of?
o Which was the most challenging item?
o Which item did you learn the most from?
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Which item was the easiest for you?
Which item was the most difficult for you?
Discuss and evaluate your performance and experience with revision in this class.
Discuss and evaluate your performance and experience in collaborative writing in
this class.
Discuss and evaluate your performance and experience with reflection in this
class.
Is there anything that you accomplished in this portfolio that surprised you?
At this point in your writing, what can you do as a writer that you could not do
before?
What will you walk away with from this class?
What have you learned in this class that will be useful in the short- and longterm?