Name:______________________________
Student #:_______________________
Directions: Read the following essay carefully. Then use the COHESIVE DEVICES from the box
below to complete the essay. This is a sample essay.
Many students think it is better to study alone than with friends. I
disagree with this. In the following essay I will explain two reasons why I
feel this way.
The first reason why I think studying with a friend is better is your
friend can help you pass the exam. ___________________, she can help
you remember what to study for the exam. ____________________, she
can show you her notes if you were absent a lot or forget some things the
teacher said in class. ________________, if you do not understand
something she can explain it to you and help you learn for the exam.
________________________, friends can be very helpful when studying for
exams.
Another reason why studying with a friend is better is studying is can
be boring by yourself. ________________ a friend can laugh and talk with
you while you learn. Also, a friend can encourage you when you get tired.
This can help you enjoy studying. _______________________, you can chat
while you study so the time goes faster. ______________, studying with a
friend can be more fun than studying alone.
___________________, these are the reasons why I think studying
with friends is better than studying alone. A friend can help you pass and
make it more interesting. I advise all students to find good people to study
with.
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