English Essay Notes
1. Rewrite intro + 1st paragraph based on the feedback given!
2nd paragraph: TRUST
The boys rely on each other (trust/believe)
Know who not to trust (believe)
EXAMPLE: Trash shows that trusting others is an important factor in dealing with challenging
situations.
DOT POINTS
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But everyone knows not to trust [the police] too far (the police/guards/Marco)
Graveyard – the boys split up to find what they need to break open the grave to collect the
money Jose Angelico hid.
Hooking Marco in the eye when escaping
3rd paragraph: HOPE
Hope that their lives could be better provides the motivation
Hope that they stay alive keeps them going
DOT POINTS
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Focus on Rat’s hope!!!