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IELTS WRITING ANSWER SHEET
(ĐÃ BỊ CẮT MỘT SỐ PHẦN VÌ BẢO MẬT)
SAU KHI HOÀN THÀNH XONG BÀI EM SẼ TRẢ LỜI NHỮNG CÂU
I.
HỎI SAU
Target Writing: 6.0
Chừng nào thi: 1/2021
Hiện tại đã thấy đủ trình độ để đi thi chưa? chưa
Nếu chưa thì em đang yếu điểm gì? Toàn diện(từ vựng, ý;..)
SAU KHI ĐÃ HOÀN THÀNH BÀI VIẾT, EM TRẢ LỜI THÀNH THẬT NHỮNG CÂU HỎI SAU ( phải trả lời bằng mực đen, chữ in
thường, kiểu chữ Arial size 11 )
1.
Số chữ viết đã viết trong bài này (Em lưu ý là Task 1 nên viết 160 words, Task 2 nên viết 300 words. Nếu viết thiếu
từ em học thêm cách cho ví dụ để kéo dài bài ra https://www.ieltstutor.me/blog/example-writing-task-2) :
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2. Em có câu hỏi gì muốn hỏi giáo viên về đề này không?
-nếu em viết không đủ 300 từ thì đọc link nào để mở mang các ý vậy chị
II. BẮT ĐẦU TÍNH THỜI GIAN LÀM BÀI ( 40 PHÚT CHO TASK 2 - 20 PHÚT
CHO TASK 1 )
II. Đề bài:
SHOULD GOVERNMENT REGULATE THE FAST FOOD
INDUSTRIES IN THE SAME WAY THAT REGULATES THE DRUG, ALCOHOL
AND TOBACCO INDUSTRIES
Dàn bài ( 5-7 PHÚT )
1.
2. Dàn bài mà em lập cho đề này
CÂU 1: Paraphrase lại fast food
Câu 2: không đồng tình quan điểm
Thân bài:
-ĐOẠN 1: ưu điểm fast food:•convenient;save time;fast;many choices
-đoạn 2: nhược điểm druf,alcohol, tobacco: health problem; kill people
Bài viết của em ( luôn nhớ max 300 words cho Task 2,
max 160 words cho Task 1)
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Tham khảo từ vựng trong bài nhé: https://www.ieltstutor.me/blog/tu-vung-topic-food-health-sports-ielts
Nowaday, popular.Government control such as drug;alcohol and tobacco industries.i don’t argued that i think junk
food is more and more popular. Em nên dùng template của ielts tutor nha, em ơi intro thì em nên viết theo template của ielts
tutor
lí do là vì intro với conclusion em chỉ nên viết trong vòng 5 phút thôi, chứ mỗi bài em viết intro mỗi kiểu vào phòng thi
chắc chẵn là em sẽ mất nhiều thời gian để nghĩ ra viết intro nên ielts tutor mới muốn hs dùng hết 1 template có thể điều
chỉnh cho mọi dạng đề essay vào thi là chỉ có viết thôi nha em ⇒ In this day and age, more and more contemporary
attention has been placed on the opinion that… In my opinion, nêu quan điểm của em ra
There are several clear advantages of eating fast food.Firstly, it is convenient and fast when people don’t have
enough time for such eat.in the modern life nowaday,everyone was busy and people cook hardly .Take myself at an
example,i usually prefer eating fast food when i have a busy schedule.Because it is save time and no excess of a
meal.for instance; people need booked website; shipper will distribute food so people don’t go out.Secondly; many
woman are bad at cooking so they choice junk food to live day.Because they think cooking is boring.Finally; when they
go KFC at the restaurant; they have many to choice from food .it was very luxurious.
On the other hand,there is some the idea using a drug,alcohol,tobacco cause many problem disadvantages.for
example, eating too much fast food cause obesity. however ,when people used alcohol;many people don’t control
behavioral or even kill people to make money.Drinking alcohol is bad for your health.especially,drug and bacco suffer
from cancer; heast disease and might even social evil .Besides; a lot of people use drug, alcohol,tobacco; they might
beat the children .it is a really burden for many families has used.therefore;government should control
drug,alcohol,tobacco than fast food
Chưa có kết bài
Tham khảo bài mẫu nhé:
bài mẫu 1 For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that it is more beneficial for the government to manage the fast food industries
in a less strict way than the drug, alcohol and tobacco industries. ⇒đúng rồi ạ, dạng opinion essay là chị chỉ cần conclusion 1 câu
trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhắc lại ý kiến của mình là okay ạ
(306 words)
bài mẫu 2
Viết bài lần 2:
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Viết bài lần 3
Viết bài lần 4
In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the opinion that the government must control
fast food industries in the same way they control drug, alcohol and tobacco . In my opinion, I completely disagree with this view
for these reasons below.
First of all,fast food is convenient and fast for those who are struggled with busy work.As a result,they do not have time for
themselves and they do not have time cooking.In such case, fast food is an excellent option for people who do not have adequate
time to cook ,therefore people just need to go fast food a restaurant or order online,especially with young people .Take myself
as an example,I usually order online food for the sake of saving time and the shipper would deliver food to my house .As a result
, fast food saves people’s time so that they have time taking care of their jobs and families.
Another justification is that fast food is not as detrimental people’s health as drug, alcohol and tobacco.Junk food uses lots of
sugars , artificial substances and oils which increase the risks of cardiovascular disease ,obesity and heart disease ,but they can do
exercise or follow a balance a diet to stay in good shape .However, if people use drug,alcohol and tobacco ,they will not control
their behaviors and they might commit violence.For instance, the rate of crime and car accident is rising and the main cause is the
consumption of drug and alcohol,meanwhile,eating fast food will not cause any harm to people around , which proves that level
of fast food is not compatible.
In conclusion,I totally lean towards the opinion that fast food should not be controlled.
Viết bài lần 5
In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the opinion that the government should control fast
food industries in the same way they control drugs, alcohol and tobacco. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this view for these
reason below.
First of all, fast food is convenient for those who is struggled with busy work.In fact, they do not have time for themselves ,and they
do not have time cooking.In such case,fast food is an excellent option ,not only good for prepare quickly but also full of nutrients as
well.Therefore,humans just need to go fast food a restaurant or ordine online, especially with young people.Take myself as an
example,I usually order online food for saving time , and the shipper would deliver food to my house .As a result, fast food saves
people’s time so that they have time taking care of their jobs and families.
Other people think that fast food is not as detrimental to people’s health as drug, alcohol and tobacco.To be more specific,junk food
uses lots of sugars, artificial substances and oils which increase the risks of cardiovascular disease, hearst disease and obesity, but
individuals can do exercise or follow a balanced diet to stay in good shape. However,if people use drugs, alcohol and tobacco , they
will not control their behaviors , likewise they might violence.As an evidence, the rate of crimes and car accidents is rising , and the
main cause is the consumption of drugs and alcohol.
In conclusion,I totally lean towards the opinion that fast food should not be controlled.