Theme : Consumerism and financial Technology
Lesson 4: Writing
Express ideas, opinions and organise information coherently.
Use of verbs : Use effective descriptive verbs
Practice 1
Use of verbs : Practice 1
Tips : Creating atmosphere and mood
Practice 1: Underline words that create
atmosphere and mood to the topic.
Crazy over shopping - a shophalic??
Setting: specific place, time period, and weather and time of day in which
the story takes place.
Atmosphere: refers to the surrounding mood, generally established through
setting.
Describing a fateful night.
It was a dark and stormy night.” I was a driving car on highway near to
seaside.
Or
“The wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees.
The moon was a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas.
The road was a ribbon of moonlight over the purple moor, I was driving car
on the fateful night.
Hi, I’m a teenager who is crazy over shopping . I
go shopping with mum , siblings or friends who
invite me. Actually, I can’t afford to shop so
often as I have limited pocket money. But I
always end up getting something. Any idea on
how I can overcome this craze over shopping?
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a
B
Pre -writing
Analyse the question.
1. What are the requirements of the question?
Brainstorm the ideas
problem
Prior
knowledge
Solution
reating atmosphere
2
Swot analysis - Critical thinking
A)
b) Use of verbs
C)Creating atmosphere C
3
Drafting
3
Sharing , evaluating ,revising ,editing
Outcome of sharing
How I can enhance my essay :
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Edit ( post writing)
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