03.07 comparative
presentation
Made by: Sarah dor
Setting
Original text: During the
medieval times of Denmark
inside the Elsinore castle
My narrative: During the
medieval times of Denmark
inside the Elsinore castle
Explanation :The setting is the
same because I rather focus on
the different plots
Plot
Original : The rest of the royal family dies at the end of the story
My narrative: Hamlet becomes king and Claudius becomes
dead at the end
Explanation: I made the plot have more of an important
change towards the end
Charactezation
Original text: Hamlet plans out a scheme to get revenge on his uncle
Claudius
My narrative: Hamlet plans out a scheme to get revenge on his uncle
Claudius
Explanation : I kept them the same cause of the major part this part play
Conflict
Original text: The conflict
was between hamlet and
Claudius and Laertes
My narrative: Claudius
and hamlet have a
conflict
Explanation : To
highlight the plot
change I kept the
character the same for
the major scene
Point of view
Original text: third
person
My narrative : third
person
Explanation : I wanted a another
ending to reflect the ending
scene of the original scene but
kept a same point
Theme
Original text: The path
for destruction is
revenge
My narrative :Leading to
victory is the righteous
path
Explanation :A less
tragic theme and more
optimistic
Tone
Original text : Hamlet is
challenged to a duel where he
may possibly die and makes the
tone of the scene unconcerned
My narrative : The tone is
suspicious in this scene cause
hamlet becomes suspicious of
the invitation from clauduis
Explanation : I changed the
tone to prove an explanation
of why it was changed to
hamlet being victorious
Dialogue
Original text :The dialogue
between hamlet and Horatio is
really to play out hamlets revenge
although there's other dialogue
between other such as Getrude
and Osric
My narrative : The dialogue between
hamlet and Horatio is really to play
out hamlets revenge although
there's other dialogue between
other such as Getrude and Osric
Explanation:The dialogue
is mostly the same of
horatio and hamlet working
together to get even with
by killing claudius
Intentional narrative technique change
Original text :The
scene is told from
a third person
point of view
Explanation: I keep it
the same point of view
to show the okay from
hamlet better
My narrative: The
scene is told from a
third person point
of view