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Hag-Seed
I. Dark Backward
Quote / Example
Prologue:
Scripted interpretation of
opening scene from The
Tempest
Ariel described as wearing “blue
bathing cap and iridescent ski
goggles”.
Techniques
- Screenplay format
- Rhyme / Rap format
- Juxtaposition of
Shakespearean
generic conventions
with contemporary
elements
(Correctional Players,
“Announcer”
- Camera directions
- Metatextuality
- Flash-forward
(structural
technique)
1. Seashore
“Felix brushes his teeth. Then
he brushes his other teeth, the
false ones…”
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Paronomasia
Humour
“He smiles: the illusion of a
smile. Pretence, fakery, but
who’s to know”
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Present tense,
limited third person
perspective
Comparison/Significance
Conveyance of uncontextualized details
foreshadows elements of Atwood’s
reinterpretation and ‘conversation’ with
The Tempest
Metatextuality of Ariel – discussion of
costume, elements of construction of
character explicitly described alongside
character’s interaction with scene.
Prologue as a flash-forward ‘framing
device’; collision of The Tempest with HagSeed reader is yet to fully understand
context of what is happening.
Paronomasia is the formal term for ‘puns’,
which can take several different forms. In
this case, it relies on the repetition of a
word where the meaning changes upon
the second utterance. In this case, the
teeth are the same thing but the meaning
shifts in the second sentence to reframe
the reader’s impression of the first one.
This is representative of the novel’s textual
density – the meaning of the text gains a
certain depth when considered in relation
to the source material, The Tempest. In
what way does this introduction to Felix
also highlights the theme of
performance/appearance?
Note also that the perspective and tense
keeps the reader close to the protagonist’s
thoughts whilst maintaining the
detachment that comes with watching a
performance.
“How he has fallen. How
deflated. How reduced.”
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Anaphora
Truncated sentences
Congery
“There. Not a syllable fluffed.”
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Interior monologue
Metatextuality
Congery is a rhetorical technique in which
the same idea is repeated using different
words. This unnecessary but lexically
diverse repetition demonstrates Felix’s
obsession over his humiliation and ‘exile’.
How does this mirror, align or collide with
the depiction of Prospero in The
Tempest?
Felix reassures himself that he is ready for
his revenge – this sets the stage, so to speak,
for the events that he is about to set in
motion. Note how this mirrors Prospero’s
manipulation of events in The Tempest. The
performance metaphor also calls the
reader’s attention to the metatextuality of
the novel as a piece of fiction that involves
the staging of the very play it reinterprets.
“Le make magic. And let’s
shove it down the throat of that
devious, twisted bastard, Tony”
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Metaphor
Juxtaposition
2. High Charms
“That devious, twisted bastard,
Tony, is Felix’s own fault.”
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Anadiplosis
This reference to the
previous chapter is
also a form of nonlinear foreshadowing
as it is also later
revealed that Felix
shouted this at Tony
prior to the events of
the novel.
“He’d recently lost his only
child, and in such a terrible
way.”
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Ambiguity
Connotation
“Felix the cloud-ridingenchanter, Tony the earthbased factotum and goldgrubber”
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Symbolism
“And Hermione’s return to life
as a vampire in The Win e
Tale: that had actually been
booed. Felix had been
delighted: What an effect! Who
else had ever done it? Where
there are boos, there’s life!”
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Metatextuality
Colon
Metaphor
“Miranda: what else would he
have named a motherless girl
with a middle-aged, doting
father?”
“It was like an enormous black
cloud boiling up over the
horizon. No: it was like a
blizzard. No: it was like nothing
he could put into language.”
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Textual allusion
Rhetorical question
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Pathetic fallacy
The violence of ‘shoving’ something
metaphorically down someone’s throat
ironically contrasts with the idea of
‘making magic’. Tony is representative of
Antonio, Prospero’s brother in The
Tempest.
The repetition of the last clause in the last
chapter as the beginning of the next
chapter (an example of anadiplosis)
emphasises and reframes the information
by adding further context. Felix reflects on
how he allowed Tony more and more
responsibility until Tony was able to take
power from him altogether – a neat
mirroring of Antonio’s eventual
supplanting of Prospero in The Tempest.
E plain A ood p po e in ing
anadiplosis here.
We don’t find out how Felix lost his only
child at this point, but we do get to find
out – through the use of the adjective
‘terrible’ - that it was in tragic
circumstances. Compare this to the
relationship between Prospero and
Miranda as representative of a way in
which Atwood subverts/challenges the
original text.
Prospero as concerned more with books
and magic, Antonio as someone able to
manipulate government for means of
political empowerment. Note also the
allusions to the classical elements – Felix
as associated with the air, Tony as
associated with the earth. Which
characters are alluded to in The Tempest
with this particular use of symbolism?
In what way could Atwood, through Felix,
be seen here as commenting on the process
of adapting Shakespeare in a way that could
be interpreted as irreverent or
disrespectful? The use of colon establishes a
relationship of cause-and-effect; the play led
to a negative reaction and, in contrast and
surprise, this actually ‘delighted’ Felix. This
demonstrates the conscious construction of
a text that subverts the source material.
Art (Hag-Seed) imitates life (a character
and their daughter) imitating art
(character consciously referencing The
Tempest).
Felix attempts to describe his feelings about
Miranda’s death by using the weather
echoing Shakespeare’s regular use of
weather motifs). Unlike Shakespeare,
though, Felix decides that this kind of
metaphor is inadequate when describing the
reality of such a tragedy. How does the
language here allude to the storm at the
beginning of The Tempest?
“What he couldn’t have in life
he might still catch sight of
through his art”
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Metaphor
3. Usurper
“He’d noted with distaste the
pattern of alternating hares and
tortoises on Tony’s red tie”
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Foreshadowing
Symbolism
Textual Allusion
“The Chair, Lonnie Gordon, was
a decent man but a paralysing
bore”
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Metonymy
Antithesis
Contrast between qualities: Good but
dull/tedious/annoying. The ‘Chair’ is a
metonym that represents Lonnie’s
ultimate power over the Board. Lonnie is
analogous to Alonso, the King of Naples in
The Tempest.
“I feel you’re losing, you know,
your edge”
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Low modality
Metaphor
Compare the ‘edge’ lost here a director
losing touch with his artistic skills and
become irrelevant in terms of his creative
ideas) with how effective a leader
Prospero (who devoted all his time to
studying his books) would have been.
“his Miranda would live again”
Felix will use his ‘art’ to conjure up the
spectre of his dead daughter. In this case,
the art is the metaphorical ‘magic’ of the
theatre – a realm in which a kind of false
reality is created by the director on the
stage. Hence, Miranda lives on in Felix’s
imagination, and The Tempest becomes an
engine through which he will be able to
generate the adolescent Miranda he never
got to meet. In what way here does the
depiction of Felix mirror, align or collide
i h Shake pea e depic ion of
Prospero?
Felix recalls the meeting in which Tony
betrayed him and his contract as Artistic
Director was terminated by the Board
(who finance the plays). The tie alludes to
the fable of the Tortoise and the Hare –
between Tony and Felix, who is who, and
why?
Ho and h i Ton lang age
conveyed in a key of low modality in this
quote?
“Ejected! Tumbled out!
Discarded!”
“The secrecy, the sabotage. The
snake-like subterfuge. The
stupendous betrayal.”
4. Garment
“Two men from Security came
into the room then … He kicks
himself now for having been so
predictable.”
Lonnie is characterised as “truly
distressed” and “a sentimental
old coot”, and someone who
was outvoted by the other
Board members.
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Congery
Congery as a feature of Felix’s personality /
narrative voice. Why? What is this
representative of?
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Shifting tense
Atwood carefully controls the shifting
perspective from past to present, allowing
the reader to orient themselves in relation
to the narrative. Compare this
sophisticated use of tense and how it
eflec mode n i ing o Shake pea e
own contextual language-constructing
methods.
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Characterisation
Intertextuality
Aside from Alonso, what other character
from The Tempest is Atwood alluding to?
Note that Lonnie is the one who gives Felix
all the props and script he’d created for his
aborted Tempest production.
5. Poor Full Cell
“…Felix didn’t have the
sensation of driving. Instead he
felt he was being driven, as if
blown by a high wind. He was
cold, although by this time the
drizzle had stopped and the sun
was shining, and also he had the
heat turned on.”
The main street of Makeshiweg
is described as a hodge-podge
of cultural and historical
influences – Renaissance, Celtic,
Inuit, English, Victorian, Thai,
Mexican.
“A retreat where he could
recuperate”
In his hiding, Felix styles himself
as “Mr. Duke”
6. Abysm of Time
“…Maude as … Sycorax the
witch, and Walter as Caliban the
semi-human log-hauler and
dishwasher, in … his Tempest
of the headspace – but that
didn’t last long. None of it
fitted”
“He found himself gravitating to
children’s stories in which
everything came out all right in
the end … Girls left for dead in
glass confines or four-poster
beds, then brought back to life
by the touch of love.”
7. Rapt in Secret Studies
“The snoop gremlin: Google”
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Pathetic fallacy
Symbolism
Felix is describing his journey from his
dismissal back to his home – how does his
language reflect the themes and events of
The Tempest? In what way is the journey
me apho ical o eflec i e of P o pe o
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Symbolism
Setting
What is Atwood saying about the modern
o ld in he de c ip ion of Feli
hometown? Compare to Shakespeare’s
exploration of ‘the world’ in The Tempest,
IE. Colonialism, discovery, sovereignty.
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Intertextuality
Compa e Feli
e ea o he han
o P o pe o e ile In ha a a e he
different? What is the significance of the
new name he gives himself?
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Intertextuality
Metatextuality
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Textual allusion
Synthesis of ideas
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Dramatic irony
Zoomorphism
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Textual allusion
Dramatic irony
Intertextuality relates to how texts
interrelate and comment on one another,
whereas metatextuality refers to the way a
text comments on its own construction. In
this description of his landlords, Felix
reveals the difficulties in applying the rules
of The Tempest to his reality. Why do you
hink ha none of i fi ed
Felix synthesises the ideas from the
various children’s stories into one
universal story that appeals to him. What
doe hi
gge abo Feli mindspace during his exile? In what way is it
reflective or subversive in regards to
P o pe o
Felix’s use of the internet, something that
is more than familiar to the reader, is
ironically described as a ‘new’ and
somewhat supernatural force (Google is
zoomorphously compared to a gremlin). In
Felix’s mind, this technology is rendered as
a form of a magic echoing Prospero’s
powers), however, this is a form of
dramatic irony as the reader is aware of
Google’s mundane and commonplace
nature.
The reader knows that Miranda doesn’t exist
and Felix, on some level, is also aware of
this. In terms of dramatic irony, the
continuance of this conceit (as the narrative
moves on) sees Felix begin to forget that this
Miranda is a figment of his imagination. The
introduction of chess is a direct reference to
The Tempest, in which the character’s final
scene depicts her playing chess with
Ferdinand (in the case of The Tempest it is
symbolic of the battle of the sexes). In the
context of Hag-Seed, what might the chess
board be symbolic of?
“It was amazing how much you
could learn about a person over
the Net”
“When she was eight, he taught
her to play chess”
“Pull yourself together. Break
out of your cell”
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Metaphor
8. Bring the Rabble
“He was summoned by email
… by which he divined that
there weren’t any other
applicants.”
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Motif of magical
language
Bathos
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Note the metaphorical phrase “break out
of your cell”. How does this reflect the
themes of The Tempest?
Atwood uses the verbs ‘summoned’ and
‘divined’ to continue the magical motif
alluded to in previous chapters. How does
hi einfo ce Feli cha ac e i a ion a a
Prospero-like figure?
Bathos refers to the undercutting of
something serious with something
ridiculous. In this case, Felix’s descent into
mental breakdown and his use of dramatic
language related to supernatural powers is
undercut by the mundane event of
receiving an email (which is followed by an
interview at McDonald’s .
“She clearly had a vision of Felix
lying on the floor with a
homemade shiv sticking out of
his neck and a puddle of blood
spreading around him”
“Shakespeare? But surely that’s
far too… there are a lot of
words… They’ll get
discouraged”
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Visceral language
Imagery
How does the introduction of Fletcher
Correctional change/challenge/reinforce
the nature of the text as a remake or
reinterpretation of The Tempest?
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Ellipsis
Metatextuality
How has ellipsis been used to reflect
E elle eac ion o Feli idea of aging
Shakespeare with the inmates?
Con ide A ood incl ion of hi ne
a dience fo Shake pea e In ha a
are the inmates like you (or not like you)
the average reader when it comes to
Shakespeare?
“The three plays he’d done so
far were acceptable, because
although each one ended with a
clutch of deaths, each also
provided a new beginning in the
shape of whoever it was who
won.”
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“With Shakespeare it was
always more or less, he took
pains to point out”
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Metatextuality
Commentary on the nature of studying
Shakespeare. What is Atwood saying
when she says that there is a degree of
mo e o le
hen i come o
Shake pea e pla
The plays are performed for
video – digitally recorded and
edited – due to the dangers of
assembling a large audience in
the correctional centre.
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Contrast
Setting
Metaphor
The nature of performance is different due
to the context of Fletcher Correctional,
and highlights the contrast between the
contemporary setting and the source
material of The Tempest.
“The limelight shone briefly and
in an obscure corner, but it
shone”
Allegory
The plays of Julius Caesar, Richard III and
Macbeth as allegorical for the experiences
of the prisoners – tragic, involving murder,
and ending with the chance of a new
beginning.
How might The Tempest prove to be
inspirational or identifiable to the
prisoners?
The metaphorical “obscure corner” echoes
the setting of the play’s scenes in
“remote” parts of the Island.
9. Pearl Eyes
“It’s now Year Four of the
Fletcher Correctional Players”
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Tense
“When you walk in here, you
shed your daily self. You
become a clean slate. Then you
draw on a new face.”
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Metaphor
Congery
Motif
“Miranda doesn’t like when he’s
away so much”
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Reported speech
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Intertextuality
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Metaphor
Motif
“She’s insisting on greenery,
she’s making him eat kale”
“She won’t stray far from the
house, he knows that. She can’t
stray far. Something constrains
her.”
“The cloak of his defeat, the
dead husk of his drowned self
… In the gloom, the gloaming,
it’s been transforming itself”
Present tense denotes the centring of the
text into the present – the narrative
becomes more linear from this point, after
now catching the reader up to the present
day. This is where the events of The
Tempest may start.
The symbolism of the clean slate and
drawing on the new face brings
connotations of The Tempest’s themes of
performance, renewal, transformation.
In what way is Felix likely to follow his
own advice? In what way do these
themes apply to The Tempest?
There are two kinds of dialogue in a text –
direct speech (the sort of dialogue
enclosed in quotation marks and coming
directly from a character) and reported
speech (when we are told what a character
says in a more general sense). Throughout
this chapter we hear from Miranda only
through reported speech, via the third
person limited perspective of Felix. This is
representative of the fact that she isn’t
real outside of Felix’s head – the reader
can’t hear her speak directly and she is
kept distant from the reader in this way as
a symbol of her nature as an imaginary
character.
In what way is this description of the
imaginary Miranda connected to The
Tempest. What other characters or
situations does this sound like?
The motif of drowning alludes to The
Tempest, and the reference to
transformation taps into the play’s
themes. What does the cloak now
symbolise for Felix?
II. A Brave Kingdom
Quote / Example
10. Auspicious Star
“Well, your wave-making has
had results!”
Techniques
- Metaphor
- Paronomasia
“He refused to call them
inmates, he refused to call them
prisoners, not while they were
in his theatre troupe.”
-
Congery
Intertextuality
“It’s about prisons”
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Intertextuality
11. The Meaner Fellows
“The smell of misery, lying over
everyone within like an
enchantment. But for a few
brief moments he knows he can
unbind that spell.”
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Synaesthesia
Motif
“It’s got a thunderstorm in it.
And revenge. Definitely
revenge”
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Summary
“There will be trouble, thinks
Felix, but not of the kind you
mean”
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Foreshadowing
Subversion
12. Almost Inaccessible
This chapter deals with the
reality of working with prisoners
to explore Shakespeare’s work;
specifically the fact that these
are traumatised men who could
be triggered by some of the
themes of the plays.
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Motif
Metatextuality
“It’s theatre, Felix protests now,
in his head. The art of true
illusions! … It conjures up
demons in order to exorcise
them!”
Comparison/Significance
Estelle is referring to the attention that
Felix has drawn from those who kicked
him off the board. The ‘wave-making’
metaphor takes on a new meaning when
considering the events of The Tempest. In
a figurative way, Felix has created a storm
that will bring his enemies to Fletcher
Correctional.
Compare Estelle to Ariel what are their
similarities and differences?
Felix articulates (in his characteristic way)
his relationship with the inmates at
Fletcher Correctional. In what way could
they be seen as analogous for the various
lesser spirits on the island in The
Tempest?
Felix speaks aloud one of his two key
themes of The Tempest to explain to
Estelle why the inmates will relate to it.
The other (unsaid) universal theme is that
of vengeance. Explain why the inmates
will relate to The Tempest.
In describing the prison, Atwood’s magic
motif continues, with synaesthesia used to
illustrate the overpowering sense of
sadness found therein. Felix’s relationship
with this isolated setting mirrors
Prospero’s characterisation as the wizard
who controls the island.
Felix tries to ‘sell’ The Tempest to the
prison guards after they express
disappointment that it doesn’t seem to
have any fight scenes in it.
What other selling points does the play
have?
In what way are Atwood (and Felix)
indicating the direction the narrative is
heading in? How will Felix assert his
power over the narrative?
The magic motif is evident in the language
used here. In what way could Feli
opinion of the role of the theatre here be
interpreted as reflective of the enduring
power of Shakespeare? Note the use of
the word ‘catharsis’.
He also says, “All theatre is ephemeral”.
What does this mean?
“My island domain. My place of
exile. My penance.
My theatre.”
13. Felix addresses the players
In this chapter, Felix matches up
the characters from The
Tempest to the inmates that he
deems most suited to playing
them.
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Congery
Metaphor
Intertextuality
Explain each separate simple sentence
used here and why they have been listed
in this particular order.
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Appropriation
Evaluation
Characterisation
The male love interest, Ferdinand, is
played the con-artist WonderBoy.
Ariel, the intelligent spirit who can travel
on the wind, is 8Handz, a hacker who can
travel through the abstract world of the
internet.
Gonzalo, the well-meaning but boring
politician, is to be played by a podgy and
dodgy accountant nicknamed ‘Bent Pencil’.
The treacherous Antonio is played by
SnakeEye, a financial fraud with a facial
deformity that makes him look like he’s
sneering.
Caliban – described by Felix as ‘muscular’,
‘scowling’, ‘earthy’, and ‘potentially
violent’ – could be played by many
different inmates quite easily.
“IT’S A MUSICAL…
MAGIC: Used for what?
PRISONS: How many?
MONSTERS: Who is one?
REVENGE: Who wants it? Why?”
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Listing
Abstraction of
themes
Felix breaks down each of the main
themes (as he sees them) for the inmates.
How would you answer each of the
questions?
“Along with your whoreson
cigarettes, may the red plague
rid them”
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Textual allusion
Metaphor
Felix demonstrates how swearing from The
Tempest can be transposed into the
modern context of Fletcher Correctional.
The recontextualising of the language in
new ways assists the inmates in gaining a
better understanding of Shakespeare’s
vernacular.
14. First Assignment: Curse
Words
“Monotony is antiShakespeare”
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Anthimeria
Felix explains why ‘earth’ is
considered an insult within the
context of The Tempest
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Metaphor
Antithesis
Pick three words of your own from The
Tempest and use them in this manner.
HINT The e li ed a he a of he
next chapter]
Anthimeria is when a word is used in a
different way to usual, IE. A noun used as a
verb, an adjective used as a noun. In this
case the proper noun ‘Shakespeare’ is
used as an adjective to describe
monotony. Felix does this to illustrate the
relationship between these two ideas – in
his mind Shakespeare is not monotonous.
Why do you think this?
‘Earth’ becomes insulting because it’s the
opposite antithesis of the element ‘air’.
In what way do the characters of The
Tempest reflect this way of thinking?
15. Oh you wonder
“He remembered the starving
actor’s first rule: never pass up
free food”
“I don’t blame them. Being a girl
is the pits, trust me”
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Metaphor
Colon
Third person limited
perspective
Colloquialism
Elision
Understatement
“He was never ready when a
slice of filth came out of her
child-like mouth.”
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Juxtaposition
Connotation
Synaesthesia
“The bee was sort of our joke”
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Textual allusion
Innuendo
16. Invisible to Every Eyeball
Else
“He keeps his voice level, takes
a few beats”
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Asyndeton
Present tense
The metaphorical ‘rule’ that Felix refers to
reveals the state of Anne-Marie’s career at
this point of time. He perceives that her
career has been cut short by Tony like his
has – making her a co-exile and, therefore,
a perfect choice to play Prospero/Felix’s
‘daughter’ Miranda.
The audience’s impression of Anne-Marie
is conveyed through Felix’s perspective,
meaning that the reader only has access to
part of her characterisation – the way she
seems through his eyes. Consider this as a
common issue between the texts
Felix/Prospero as a figure of authority
unable to recognise other perspectives,
especially while attempting to orchestrate
an elaborate revenge scheme.
Anne-Marie’s use of the colloquial term
‘the pits’ carries the connotation that
being a female isn’t a good experience.
This slang term originated as an elision
shortening of the word ‘armpits’, used to
metaphorically represent something as
being the worst. Anne-Marie’s
conversational use of this colloquialism in
response to the male prisoner’s not
wanting to perform a female role is
understated and ironic – or is it? What do
you think and why? How have times
changed for women between Hag-Seed
and The Tempest.
The casting of a female in an all-male
context alludes to theatrical conventions in
Shakespeare’s times.
Felix’s attitudes in regards to gender and
age are somewhat revealed through his
reaction to Anne-Marie’s bathetic
swearing. There is a clear contrast
between his description of her language as
‘filth’ and his description of the way she
looks ‘child-like’. What does this suggest
about Felix?
Anne-Marie’s tattoo is a deliberate allusion
to one of Ariel’s quotes from The Tempest.
The full explanation is left unsaid by AnneMarie but the way they connect is implied
to be a form of sexual innuendo. In what
way does this reframing of an aspect of
The Tempest lead to Hag-Seed mirroring,
aligning or colliding with The Tempest?
Atwood uses present tense and asyndeton
(the omission of conjunctions from a
sentence to convey the pacing of Felix’s
delivery of news to the inmates. In what
way does this demonstrate The Tempest s
theme of performance and how does the
shifted context of Fletcher Correctional
change he eade
ie of hi heme
“scurvy awesome”
“way to red plague go!”
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Anthimeria
“Equally useless to tell them
that “suck” in Shakespeare’s
time did not have the many
derogatory meanings it has
since acquired, because it has
those meanings now, and now
is when they’re putting on the
play”
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Connotation
Anadiplosis
Metatextuality
17. The isle is full of noises
“The outer gates swing open,
propelled by invisible hands. My
thanks, ye demi-puppets, Felix
addresses them silently, ye
elves of barbed wire, tasers, and
strong walls”
“Creating an illusion through
doubles”
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Motif
Zoomorphism
-
Metaphor
“…that’s why she’s rendered
herself invisible, though she’s
usually almost invisible anyway”
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Paradox
Dramatic irony
“the small girl on the swing,
frozen in Time’s jelly.”
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Disassociation
Personification
Imagine you saw these lines of dialogue
two years ago and had no knowledge of
their context. How has your study of The
Tempest/Hag-Seed changed your
impression of these lines.
Felix demonstrates a relationship of causeand-effect through his use of anadiplosis
(each clause repeats a word from the end
of the last clause – in this case ‘meaning’
and ‘now’ . He reasons that, as the word
‘suck’ has changed over time in the shades
of connotation it carries, the prisoners will
not be willing to engage with delivering it
in the same way. Atwood uses Felix here
to discuss one of the common issues with
performing Shakespeare in the modern
age. What conclusion does Felix come to
and how does it reflect the influence of
context on the performance of
Shakespeare?
Felix characterises the technology of the
automatic gate with supernatural/beastly
qualities, reflecting the ongoing magical
motif that Atwood employs to describe
Felix’s point of view. This supports the
analogy of Felix-as-Prospero.
Felix plans to use special effects to achieve
his ‘magical’ feat – the use of video will
allow him to create two versions of events;
the reality and the projected false version.
Consider this development in relation to
The Tempest heme of pa alleli m and
performance.
Ho i Feli
ela ion hip i h hi
Miranda changing and what does it
reflect? Note the use of dramatic irony or
paradox in your response.
Felix disassociates the girl in the photo
from Miranda by referring to her as ‘the
small girl’ rather than by name. He also
personifies time (denoted by its
capitalisation). What does this reveal
about Felix at this point in time?
Look at this quote from Prospero, in which
time is also personified:
“Now does my project gather to a head. /
My charms crack not, my spirits obey, and
Time / Goes upright with his carriage.”
In wha a do he o o e mi o
align o collide
Thi i land mine
“Caliban is bound to raise
uncomfortable issues.”
-
Connotation
Why ‘uncomfortable’? What is the
connotation of this term in this context?
Is this an understatement on Felix’s part?
What do the prisoners and Caliban have
in common?
Felix discusses the nature of the
island and how it is a different
place for each of the characters
– Caliban, Ariel, Prospero and
Miranda , Alonso, Antonio and
Sebastian, Gonzalo, Ferdinand,
Stephano and Trinculo.
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19. Most Scurvy Monster
“There’s more to Caliban, he’ll
tell them, than just an ugly
face”
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Simile
Metonym
“PRISONER. PRISON. JAILER… I
found at least seven prisons.
Maybe you can find more…”
-
Metaphor
Polyptoton
“Let’s say a prison is any place
or situation that you’ve been
put in against your will, that you
don’t want to be in, and that
you can’t get out of.”
Listing
Synthesis of ideas
Atwood uses Felix to synthesise the
concept of the Island and what it
represents to each character.
Create a table and summarise what the
island means to each character. Create an
additional column, and summarise what
the performance of The Tempest means
to Felix, Estelle, Tony and Sal, the Fletcher
Correctional Players, Anne-Marie.
Felix considers Caliban to be a character
with some depth. He rejects the
metonymy of reducing Caliban to his looks.
What do you think Felix means by this?
What additional depths does Caliban
have?
Polyptoton refers to using multiple words
with the same root meaning, EG.
‘PRISONER. PRISON. JAILER’ What is the
purpose of this technique in this context?
There are 9 literal and metaphorical
prisons in The Tempest. What are they?
III. These Our Actors
Quote / Example
P o pe o Goblin
“Plus he’s a land stealer,” adds
Red Coyote. “Suckin’ old white
guy. He should be called
Prospero Corp. Next thing he’ll
discover oil on it, develop it,
machine-gun everyone to keep
the off it.”
“…Tony and Sal, surrounded by
goblins. Herded by them.
Menaced by them. Reduced to
a quivering jelly.”
Techniques
- Historical Allusion
- Connotation
- Context
- Tricolon
-
22. The Persons of the Play
“Should he cast by type or
against type? Uglies in parts
that call for beauty, a gorgeous
hunk as Caliban? Put them into
roles that will force them to
explore their hidden depths, or
are those depths better left
unexplored? Challenge the
audience by showing them wellknown characters in surprising
and possibly disagreeable
guises?”
“…fear can be very motivating.
Sea-changing, you might say.”
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Accumulation
Metaphor
Visceral Language
Epiphora
Foreshadowing
-
Stream of
consciousness
Metatextuality
-
Motif
Metaphor
23. Admired Miranda
“In the play, Miranda
traditionally wears white.”
-
Symbolism
“That’s why Caliban smells like a
fish!”
-
Exclamation
Comparison/Significance
Think about the name of the character
who delivers this piece of dialogue and the
significance of this. How does this quote
demonstrate the themes of colonialism
and ep e en a ion of he o he
Felix describes the function of the goblins
in The Tempest and uses this aspect of the
play to convince the inmates to work as his
‘enforcers’ during the performance.
Explain how two of the listed techniques
feature in the quoted extract.
Stream of consciousness is used to
demonstrate Felix’s thinking process,
which could be seen as representative of
the author’s own thinking process in
constructing her retelling of The Tempest.
To what extent has she played into these
ideas or against them?
These thoughts are conveyed by Felix at
the end of this chapter after considering
dressing the Goblins in black ski masks like
“bank robbers and terrorists”. He likes this
idea because it will scare Tony and Sal
when they come to watch the
performance. Why do you think Atwood
and Feli ha e ed he e m eachanging he e
White as a symbol of virginity. Note the
use of the word ‘traditionally’ here,
relating to The Tempest’s reflection of
traditional values.
Felix wonders what Prospero and Miranda
eat while in exile on the island and
deduces from the line “No mo e dam I ll
build for fish” that Caliban has been
providing fish for them to eat. Atwood
uses this moment to demonstrate the level
of detail that can be pulled from The
Tempest by studying its lines. Felix, a
Shakespearean expert, surprises himself at
only working this out so many years after
first reading the play.
“It is real… More than real.
Hyper-real. You’ll see.”
-
Foreshadowing
“Forewarned is forearmed… this
kid could talk the pants off a
statue of Queen Victoria”
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Hyperbole
“Don’t blame me, blame my
fucking hormones”
“You’re doing well, only quench
the swearing. It’s off-limits,
remember; especially for
Miranda”
“This is a foreign language to
Felix. What is Merida from
Brave?”
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Anadiplosis
Profanity
-
Metaphor
Textual Allusion
24. To the Present Business
“Should he extend a helping
hand? No, he should not…”
“It does say in The Tempest,
‘Thought is free,’ but
unfortunately that’s in a song
sung by three idiots.”
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Stream of
consciousness
-
Irony
Bathos
Context
“The King part – all he does is
moan”
-
Truncated sentence
Colloquialism
“Felix waits until she’s gone. He
lowers his voice.”
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Present tense
Verb choice
Intertextuality
“If you can fix up what I have in
mind … I’m pretty sure I can
get you early parole”
Felix can’t help but hint at his plan to exact
revenge upon Tony and Sal. Aside from
functioning as a form of foreshadowing,
how does this line reflect one of the key
themes of The Tempest and the way that
Hag-Seed offers a resonance or
dissonance on said theme.
Felix describes WonderBoy, the inmate he
has cast as Ferdinand, to Anne-Marie.
Compare and contrast Felix de c ip ion
of WonderBoy to what we know about
Ferdinand. In what way does each
character reveal values and perspectives
related to their time?
Consider Felix’s perspective of Miranda and
how this collides with Anne-Marie as a
modern young(ish) female. In what way
does this exchange reflect changing values
related to context?
Anne-Marie suggests using Disney Princesses
for the masque scene, which is a little
beyond Felix’s realm of knowledge
(demonstrates by his obvious ignorance of
the film Brave). How effective is this change
to the play, and why is it necessary?
Ho doe hi mall indo in o Feli
thinking processes reveal changing values in
ela ion o Shake pea e con e
Felix is referring to a song sung by the
drunken butler, Stephano, to Caliban and
Trinculo while the invisible Ariel plays along
with music. Felix draws this comment out as
a contrast to the physical confines of
imprisonment, though there are layers of
irony and his anticlimactic contextualising of
the quote provides a moment of bathos –
that said, to what extent do you agree that
ho gh i f ee ?
Krampus, one of the inmates,
conversationally summarises Alonso in the
space of just a sentence. In what way has
Atwood used the prisoners as a way to
explore the way modern audiences can
understand, appreciate and/or enjoy
classical texts like The Tempest?
Atwood’s choice of ‘lower’ modifies our
impression of the conversation that Felix is
about to have with 8Handz, and the use of
present tense reminds the audience of
events unfolding in real time and suggests a
sense of urgency. This provides a parallel
with The Tempest, in which Prospero
schemes and he keeps the main part of his
plans from Miranda (Anne-Marie).
In ha a he e doe Feli p omi e o
8Handz provide a resonance between both
texts?
25. Evil Bro Antonio
“He said it was love at first
sight. I said it was only a play, it
wasn’t real.”
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Intertextuality
How does this exchange between AnneMarie and Felix, in regards to WonderBoy,
reflect the themes of both texts?
“Sieg heil, great monster!”
-
Historical allusion
Metaphor
8Handz combines what he knows about Ariel
with how he feels about Felix to adlib this
line of dialogue. How does this quote
demon a e A ood commen a on The
Tempest from a 21st century perspective?
SnakeEye and Felix discuss Act
1, Scene 2 of The Tempest and
how boring it is.
-
Intertextuality
Metatextuality
26. Quaint Devices
“Humiliating for them, but their
apotheosis waits.”
-
Lexical choices
Metaphor/Irony
“He’s spotted Felix for a
masochist; not so far from the
mark, thinks Felix.”
-
Irony
Characterisation
Atwood uses this scene to address the way
directors and adapters (like herself)
approach Shakespeare’s work. What
happens in Hag-Seed in relation to this
scene and how does Atwood demonstrate
he challenge of adap ing Shake pea e
play? Note also that this scene provides a
chance to mirror/align/collide with the
original text’s relationship between Prospero
and Antonio.
The use of ‘apotheosis’ here reveals the
extent of the lexicon that Felix draws upon,
and helps to reinforce his characterisation as
an self-important intellectual. The use of the
term ‘apotheosis’ is also ironic – the word
relates to the divine elevation of something
to its highest point; compare this definition
to the role of these Disney toys in The
Tempest.
What does this mean and how does it
reflect a resonance or dissonance between
the two texts?
27. Ignorant of What Thou Art
“He reminds himself that she
doesn’t leave footprints, so
lightly does she tread.”
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Situational Irony
Symbolism
At the beginning of this chapter, Felix thinks
about Miranda playing in the snow but
notices that there aren’t any footprints to
indicate that she has down this recently. The
quoted section of his thoughts provides an
example of situational irony after this point.
The first clause suggests to the reader that
Felix has remembered here that Miranda
isn’t real, however, the second clause
provides a different explanation for her lack
of footprints – playing against the reader’s
expectations. This example of situational
irony demonstrates how much further into
his delusion Felix has gone. What does this
gge abo Feli de elopmen a hi
point in the play?
28. Hag-Seed
“They’ve use backscreen
projections, they’ve used
inflatables, they did it on stilts a
few years ago”
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Enumeratio
Metatextuality
Enumeratio is a rhetorical technique in
which details or examples are listed to
emphasise and amplify a point. In this case,
Anne-Marie gives a range of examples
explaining how the masque scene has been
dealt with by other directors of The Tempest.
How does this sequence of the novel
demonstrate metatextuality?
“It’s not my play … It’s our
play.”
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Epiphora
Context
29. Approach
“…real life is brilliantly coloured,
says another part of his brain.
It’s made up of every possible
hue, including those we can’t
see. All nature is a fire:
everything forms, everything
blossoms, everything fades. We
are slow clouds…”
“There they are, them and their
sound bites, three hundred
miles away”
-
Symbolism
Paradox
Pathetic fallacy
Metaphor
Anaphora
Inclusive/collective
pronouns
-
Embedded clause
Metonym
Miranda delivers Ariel’s
dialogue into Felix’s ear while
he rehearses as Prospero and
he becomes excited that she
has found a way to include
herself in the play.
-
Intertextuality
Characterisation
The use of ‘play’ at the end of two successive
clauses is a form of repetition (epiphora, to
be exact , however, the change from ‘my’ to
‘our’ shifts the overall meaning of who the
play belongs to. What point might Atwood
be making about The Tempest here in terms
of the ever-changing context of
Shakespeare?
Felix considers the complexity of human
experience here, reflecting the complex
nature of The Tempest itself as a ‘problem
play’, IE. A play that some critics have found
difficult to define. Pick one of the
techniques listed here and explain how the
Atwood has used this technique to express
the complexity of using literature to express
the human experience.
The metonym of ‘sound bites’ is included as
an embedded clause to expand on how Felix
sees the ‘they’ of the sentence Tony and
Sal). The two antagonists are reduced to
‘sound bites’, a term that refers to the
catchy quotes that politicians offer for the
media to use, and only one part of their
existence. Why has Felix used this metonym
to describe Tony and Sal?
Consider the development of the plot here in
relation to Felix and his ‘imagined’ daughter
Miranda. From a psychological standpoint,
his mind has found a way for him to ‘carry’
his hallucination of Miranda with him into
the prison as she’ll be understudying the
part of Ariel. Her invisibility provides a way
for him to rationalise to himself why the
other characters will not be able to see her.
IV. Rough Magic
Quote / Example
30. Some Vanity of Mine Art
“DREAMS…”
Techniques
- Stream of
consciousness
- Metatextuality
“You’re not my real dad”
-
Intertextuality
A con man playing an actor. A
double unreality.
-
Metatextuality
31. Bountiful Fortune, Now My
Dear Lady
“The contact was courtesy
8Handz: each side could trust
the other like a brother”
-
Hyperbole
Colon
“Heritage Minister Price and
Justice Minister O’Nally are
pulling the plug on the Fletcher
Correctional literacy program”
-
Alliteration
Metaphor
Historical allusion
“Lady Luck can be a nice dame”
-
Textual allusion
Personification
32. Felix Addresses the Goblins
“But first, the pre-battle
speech”
-
Metaphor
Connotation
Textual allusion
Generic Conventions
Alliteration
Motif
“Tip of the tongue”
Comparison/Significance
Felix, upon waking from a dream,
considers the significance of dreams to The
Tempest and reconsiders the role of this
theme in the text. His rejection of this
theme, “The guys have their hands full as it
is,” is representative of the author’s place
as editor when considering which
elements of The Tempest to include in
Hag-Seed. What is one other element of
The Tempest that has been mostly or
entirely left out, and why?
Anne-Marie reminds Felix that she isn’t the
real Miranda to his Prospero. Consider
how this provides a point of dissonance
with The Tempest.
This is meta-metatextuality, in a way, as
the text (Hag-Seed) is commenting on
Felix’s text his production of The Tempest)
as a commentary on the original text
Shakespeare’s The Tempest). How does
this provide commentary on the motif of
performance as a reflection of
appearance vs. reality.
In this scene Felix organises through
8Handz to get drugs and needles that will
allow him to sedate Sal and Tony, and/or
make them hallucinate. How does this
provide a parallel with the nature of
P o pe o po e in The Tempest?
It’s worth remembering that Hag-Seed
takes place in an entirely different context
to Shakespeare’s The Tempest. In what
way does this extra detail provides an
opportunity for Atwood to discuss
modern values relating to literature?
Felix’s personification of good fortune as
‘Lady Luck’ mirrors Prospero’s praise for
his ‘dear lady’ ‘Fortune’ for bringing his
enemies to the island.
Wh ha Feli
ed he e m p e-battle
peech he e Look a he echniques
listed for assistance]
The repeated alliterative phrase ‘Tip of the
tongue’ is a vocal exercise designed to help
actors prepare for speaking articulately and
clearly. These kind of vocal warm-ups are
usually alliterative ‘tongue-twisters’ as they
help actors exercise their mouth shapes
before delivering lines. This features as a
motif throughout Hag-Seed in order to
remind the reader of the performance
aspect: the performance of The Tempest and
the ‘performance’ that Felix is putting on for
everyone else’s benefit.
“Phil … might lose his nerve
and break the charm”
-
Motif
Metaphor
“…for Alonso and Gonzalo –
sorry, for O’Nally and Lonnie
Gordon”
-
Freudian slips
The Ho
No Come
“What’s the quote? Nature
versus nurture, something like
that”
-
Textual allusion
Low modality
“Freddie is awkward, wideeyed: this is a whole other
world, one that he’s never
thought much about”
-
Metaphor
Textual allusion
“Nice idea, this ginger ale. Too
bad there’s no booze in it”
-
Dramatic irony
“He’s gazing deeply into her
wide blue eyes … Now he’s
looking at her one bare
shoulder”
-
Imagery
Adverbs
“I couldn’t have done it all
without Ariel … Without
Handz”
Phil the Pill is one of the few inmates who
objects to Felix’s secret plan. Felix and the
other inmates have convinced him to play
along, however, Felix has not included Phil
in the main Goblin business just in case
Phil has a change of heart at the last
minute. The ‘charm’ referred to here
continues the magic motif utilised by
Atwood in her description of Felix’s
thought-processes. In this case the ‘charm’
refers to Felix’s ‘magical’ ability to
convince and manipulate the inmates into
doing his bidding. Look back through this
document and collect all the magic
metaphors together to show the extent of
this motif. Bonus points if you can find
any of your own examples from the text
surplus to what has been already listed.
A Freudian slip is an unintentional error
that reveals subconscious thoughts. In the
case, Felix mistakenly refers to two of the
visiting politicians as characters from The
Tempest. Wh o ld Feli efe o O Nall
and Lonnie as these two particular
characters? The second example, where
Felix refers to Handz as his character’s
name, indicates Felix’s increasingly
unstable state of mind.
Sal alludes to a famous and ongoing
philosophical debate regarding which
aspect of a human’s origins has more
influence – their genetic make-up (nature)
or their upbringing (nurture). The quote he
is unwittingly referring to is from The
Tempest, “a born devil, on whose nature/
Nurture can never stick”, delivered by
Prospero in regards to Caliban. What do
you think in regards to this debate
which is more influential; nature or
nurture?
In The Tempest, Ferdinand speaks the
now-famous line, “O brave new world,
that has such people in’t” in reference to
Miranda. In what way does Freddie, the
son of the politician Sal, provide a
reframing or reimagining of The Tempest?
Sal reflects on the ginger ale offered to
him as he drinks it. In what way is this
dramatic irony, or how does this moment
shape our impression of the character?
Atwood uses the adverb ‘deeply’ to
describe the way Freddie looks at AnneMarie upon meeting her. Why does she
describe their meeting in this way? In
what way does this meeting between
these two characters provide a parallel
counterpoint to The Tempest? In what
way does it provide a dissonance
between the two texts?
34. Tempest
Script of first scene of the
Fletcher Correctional Players’
production of The Tempest.
-
Screenplay format
Intertextuality
35. Rich and Strange
“A shot. “They’ve killed him!”
wails Sal.”
-
Present tense
Truncated sentence
Collage
“Shhh! What you need to do is
stick to the script.”
-
Imperative language
“So would you mind if I did fall
in love with you?”
“I don’t think so,”
-
Ambiguity
36. A Maze Trod
“I think we should look on the
bright side. Until we know for
sure.” (Lonnie)
“He’s going to go on like that for
hours” Tony
-
Metaphor
Textual allusion
Hyperbole
“Did we record all of that?”
-
Juxtaposition
Situational irony
The use of a screenplay format conveys
exactly how the first scene of The Tempest is
performed by the Fletcher Correctional
Players, however, Atwood blends this with
the actual events happening in Hag-Seed
from the moment where it says “The screen
goes black”. How has the 21st century
format of the screenplay been utilised by
Atwood to shape new meaning in her own
narrative?
The sentences in this section of the text are
fragmentary and truncated to denote the
chaos that is taking place, and the lack of
information that Sal and Tony have in
regards to what is happening. The removal
of Freddie from Sal, and his belief that his
son has been killed, mirror events in The
Tempest in regards to Alonso and Ferdinand.
Anne-Marie, as Miranda, directs Freddie to
play the part of Ferdinand. How has the
narrative of Hag-Seed shifted the nature of
Mi anda Fe dinand ela ion hip Wha
does this reveal about the newer
themes/values that Hag-Seed explores?
Freddie plays the part of Ferdinand falling
instantly in love with Miranda but also seems
to be genuinely falling for Anne-Marie
despite the intensity (or perhaps because of
it?) of the situation. It is ambiguous at this
point whether Anne-Marie is reciprocal of
these feelings or not. What do you think?
Why and how is this kept ambiguous by
Atwood?
Lonnie tries to reassure Sal that the gunshot
they heard may not have meant Freddie’s
death. Atwood continues to use Lonnie as a
parallel for Gonzalo here, mirroring the way
Gonzalo tries to get Alonso to appreciate the
island after they are shipwrecked. In similar
fashion, Tony undercuts this optimism much
like Antonio does with Gonzalo.
This scene goes on as a neat parallel to the
scene in The Tempest Lonnie and Sal go to
sleep, having been drugged by Felix, and
Tony and Sebert discuss their secret plans
for taking over in local government. Tony
suggests that Sal and Lonnie might ‘die’ in
the riots.
The scheming of Tony and Sebert suddenly
cuts to a scene of Felix watching them via
camera, the equivalent of a dramatic ‘smash
cut’ in a film where a contrast is provided
between two scenes. The similarity of the
scheming with Antonio in The Tempest also
provides a chance for Atwood to surprise the
reader as she provides an extra dimension
through the revelation that this version has
been recorded by 8Handz. In what way has
the 21st century context allowed for
Atwood to subvert the ideas in The Tempest
here?
37. Charms Crack Not
8Handz uses two songs,
Metallica’s Ride the Lightning
and Leonard Cohen’s Bird on
the Wire, in his role as Ariel to
direct/charm the visiting
politicians.
“Eye of newt. Ketamine. Salvia.
Mushrooms … They’ll be
buzzed out of their minds”
-
Textual Allusion
Intertextuality
After listening to these songs and reading
their lyrics, what is your impression of
them in the context of the scenes depicted
in Hag-Seed. What are these songs
suggestive of?
-
Colloquialism
Listing
Metaphor
38. Not a Frown Further
“We could put them on show
… Gibbering lunatics. Street
people. Addicts. Dregs of
society. Always good for a
laugh.”
“People would pay good money
to see this … Ministers of
Justice in Drug-Fuelled
Meltdown. Great headline!”
“We know what you took!
White-collar crook! / Whitecollar crook! We KNOW what
you took!”
-
Textual allusion
Congery
Satire
8Handz explains to Felix what drugs are in
the grapes, which provides a modern-day
explanation for the ‘magic’ that is being
worked on the politicians. How has
Atwood used humour in this scene? In
what way does it create a resonance or
dissonance with Shake pea e
i ing
In their roles as Trinculo and Stephano,
TimEEz and Red Coyote unwittingly mirror
their dialogue about Caliban being the kind
of side-show ‘freak’ that people would pay
to see. In what way does Atwood use this
moment to provide satirical commentary
on our modern day context?
-
Antimetabole
Inversion
“Am I supposed to say, ‘I would,
sir, were I human’?”
-
Textual allusion
Irony
Intertextuality
39. Merrily, Merrily
“You’re crazy”
-
Bathos
“The video’s already stored in
the cloud”
-
Motif
Paranomasia
The ‘Caliban song’ sung at Sal, Tony and
Sebert accuses them of being monsters
due to their ‘white collar’ crimes. This
inverts the idea that Caliban/the criminals
are the monsters in this society (especially
after Tony and Sal’s previous criticism of
the prison). Wha
hi e colla c ime a e
being alluded to here? How does this
criticism mirror, align or collide with The
Tempest and its own commentary on
monstrosity?
8Handz expresses confusion over the
blurring of lines between what is
happening and the events of The Tempest.
Much like Ariel does to Prospero, he
suggests to Felix that the politicians have
had enough punishment. Felix recognises
this resonance, which reminds 8Handz of
the scene in question. His response brings
into focus the layers of performance and
reality that have collided in their scheme.
Adding further density to this is the
‘presence’ of invisible Miranda also
mirroring Ariel and asking Felix, “Do you
love me?”
The dramatic revelation of Felix and his
demands is undercut by Tony’s rather
cliched accusation that Felix is crazy. How
does this exchange of dialogue highlight
the changed context between the two
texts?
The double-meaning of the ‘cloud’
provides a technological explanation whilst
continuing the magic motif.
“True romance. You can’t fight
it. Anyway, it’s the best
outcome”
-
Bathos
Truncated sentences
“That’s what you do while you
hold their feverish hands and
stroke their foreheads in the
hospital room, but despite
everything they slip gently away
from you, into the dark
backward and abysm of time”
-
Imagery
Flashback
Euphemism
“Why does it feel like a
letdown?”
-
Anticlimax
Felix’s offhand comment here provides a
conversational tone that signals the break
from the ‘performance’ they have all been
enacting. It also provides a further
example of the way Hag-Seed mirrors,
aligns or collides with The Tempest; AnneMarie has been given an opportunity by
Felix to reinvigorate her career and is
therefore most likely to show some degree
of loyalty to him, and her relationship with
Freddie only serves to legitimise and
strengthen the new deal that Felix has
made with Freddie’s father, Sal. Explain
how this reflects events in The Tempest.
“Slip gently away from you”
euphemistically refers to the toddler
Miranda’s death, and reflects the pain of
her passing. Coming this late in the novel,
Atwood uses this flashback to remind the
reader (and Felix) that his plans of
vengeance and reward do little to fix the
tragedy that has been with him for the
entirety of this time. Consider how this
contrast/compares with P o pe o
characterisation towards the end of The
Tempest.
V. This Thing of Darkness
Quote / Example
40. Last Assignment
“That Miranda was a stone cold
fox!”
“Thanks,” says Anne-Marie a
little drily.
41. Team Ariel
“This play is about changing
your mind”
“…he flies off to tackle climate
change. Sort of like Storm in the
X-Men.”
Techniques
- Metaphor
- Adverb
Comparison/Significance
Note the use of the adverb ‘drily’ to
modify Anne-Marie’s response of ‘thanks’.
Wha i he p po e of A ood
i ing
choice? What values are revealed or
suggested by it?
Li he a in hich Hand he i
about The Tempest could be proven.
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Summary of the
abstract (thesis)
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Intertextuality
Metatextuality
42. Team Evil Bro Antonio
“It was like leaving your car
unlocked: he made crime easy
for Antonio”
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Analogy
SnakeEye and Team Evil Bro
Antonio outline a brutal sequel
to The Tempest in which most
of the characters are murdered
by Antonio, including Miranda
(who is also raped by Antonio
and Caliban . This doesn’t sit
well with some of the other
characters (or, presumably, the
reader).
43. Team Miranda
“You’re talking as if Miranda is
just a rag doll … But it
wouldn’t be like that”
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Generic Conventions
Metatextuality
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Metaphor
Connotation
Anne-Marie provides an alternate reading
of the character of Miranda that reflects a
feminist, 21st century context.
“Anne-Marie rolls up her sleeve,
shows them her bee tattoo”
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Chekhov’s Gun
Symbolism
The bee tattoo, mentioned much earlier in
the text, suddenly takes on more
significant meaning as a charm that
Miranda uses to control Ariel once
Prospero frees him.
“the illusory is real”
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Metaphor
Paranomasia
“Goddess power, right in the
nuts!”
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Colloquialism
Exclamation
The wordplay employed by Anne-Marie
here refers to Ariel’s acceptance of the
illusory as his reality, owing to his own
magical state. In what way could this be
seen as a metaphor for the text(s) motif
of performance?
Anne-Marie’s feminist sequel to The
Tempest summed up in one sentence.
8Handz and the other inmates on Team
Ariel use their pre-existing knowledge of
texts like The X-Men to draw connections
to The Tempest, allowing for a deeper
understanding (which illustrates the very
point of intertextuality, and metatextually
explains why a book like Hag-Seed should
exist). The inclusion of climate change
provides a 21st century lens through which
the character of Ariel can be reframed.
SnakeEye uses an analogy to demonstrate
his understanding of what happened to
Prospero, and illustrates the more complex
nature of one of the key themes of The
Tempest: power and responsibility. Who is
at fault for what happened to Prospero
and why?
Wha do o make of SnakeE e
scenario? Why do you think Atwood has
included this?
44. Team Gonzalo
“They’re just a show put on by
Ariel. They aren’t real
goddesses.”
“They are now,” says AnneMarie.
“Is extreme goodness always
weak? Can a person be good in
the absence of power?”
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Metatextuality
What is the significance of Anne-Ma ie
retort to Feli a e ion ha I i Ce e
and J no a en ac al godde e
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Anthypophora
45. Team Hag-Seed
“She had her failings, but she
did what she could for him. She
was tough”
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Generalised use of
the pronoun ‘she’ in
place of name
Truncated sentence
“…after a while of this he gets a
bunch of disease … and then
he flops over and dies.”
-
Historical allusion
Visceral language
“was there consent, who
knows, he said, she said…”
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Aposiopesis
“They think he’s, like, rugged.”
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Analogy
Anthypophora is a rhetoric device in which
a person poses a question for dramatic
effect and then provides an answer. Bent
Pencil, in discussing Gonzalo, poses these
two answers and provides a partial answer
in order to illustrate the complex nature of
power. Look at the entire section of this
chapter wherein Bent Pencil offers his
summary of Gonzalo what points does
he make about power?
Note that Leggs refrains from naming
Sycorax here, opting instead to refer to her
only as ‘she’, thus demonstrating the sense
of identification that many of the inmates
feel for Caliban and his ‘tough’ mother. In
what way is this illustrative of one of the
key themes of both texts; representation
of he o he
Leggs’ imagined scenario of Caliban’s fate
alludes to stories from history where
Indigenous people were brought back to
Europe by colonists and explorers.
Susceptibility to new diseases is what
killed the real life Pocahontas when she
went back to England with John Smith
didn’t see that in the Disney film, did we?
It’s also one of the main things that led to
the death of millions of American Indians
when the Spanish first arrived in Mexico
and the Caribbean. Consider this in
relation to the representation of the
other.
Aposiopesis is a rhetorical device in which
ideas are left incomplete. Leggs’ uses it
here to convey a whole series of ideas
related to sexual consent, protecting
reputation, lying, etc. The brevity in which
Leggs’ brushes over is darkly funny as it
provides a sharp contrast with AnneMarie’s feminist reading two chapters
earlier, and the colloquial/disjointed
manner in which he says it also contrasts
with his insightful discussion of Caliban’s
nature just previously.
Building on this humour is Leggs’
description of a new Caliban given a makeover by Prospero, and the analogy that he
will become some kind of tortured/’emo’
musical genius with an substance-abused
problem, like Kurt Cobain or any other
number of counter-culture musicians.
46. Our Revels
Leggs and the Hag-Seeds
perform a new song they wrote
about Caliban.
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Allegory
47. Now Are Ended
“Prospero is a prisoner inside
the play he himself composed”
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Metatextuality
In what ways can the Caliban song be
seen as allegorical for the experience of
prisoners? Find some quotes from the
song and explain how they could be seen
as representative of the life of prisoners.
Considering, for a moment, that
Shakespeare definitely knew that The
Tempest would be his last play. In what
a co ld P o pe o epilog e be seen as
metatextual?
Epilogue: Set Me Free
Quote / Example
“He’ll break his staff, he’ll
drown his book, because it’s
time for younger people to take
over”
“Everything is ephemeral, he
reminds himself. All gorgeous
palaces, all cloud-capped
towers. Who should know that
better than he?”
“… Handz deserved some good
fortune, and the sea air would
be so liberating for him.”
“To the elements be free,” he
says to her.
And, finally, she is.”
Techniques
- Metaphor
- Textual allusion
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Metaphor
Textual allusion
Rhetorical question
Motif
-
Paronomasia
Textual allusion
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Motif
Textual allusion
Embedded clause
Comparison/Significance
Felix uses the symbolism of Prospero’s
rejection of magic as a metaphor for his
own official retirement from professional
directing.
What does Felix mean by this?
The personification of Lady Luck/Fortune is
alluded to in the phrase ‘good fortune’,
providing a subtle pun in regards to Felix
looking after a post-parole 8Handz. Look
carefully at the second clause in the quote
and identify/explain how it alludes to
Ariel.
Felix ‘lets go’ of his Miranda and Atwood
provides another mirror for the text’s
other Ariel.
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