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My writing hook
Made with passion for words
PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 11, 2020 10:31AM
PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 12, 2020 10:39AM
I won't continue it because the start doesn't seem to interest me Jack ― ANONYMOUS
1. What about the hook that you like/dislike?
2. Would you continue reading? Why?
The story didn't sound that interesting, so I most likely won't
continue - Kean Hong ― ANONYMOUS
hook 3 is my favorite- Amin ― AMIN
Too plain-wayen
. ― JING XUAN PANG
. ― ANONYMOUS
― ANONYMOUS
I will continue reading this book because i want to know why is it
the worst day of the narrator life. ― CHUNG CHEOK CHANG
Amin- Yes I sounds interesting. I would like to read more.
PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 12, 2020 09:48AM
― AMIN
Hook 5
I woke up and went to school by bus like I alway do. But today
was't like always. It was the worst day of my life.
i don't like it
Hook 4
"Hurry up or you will be late?" Echoed mum from the bottom of
― KIT HOU TEOH
Ethan - Very relatable(me) it has great choice of word.
― ANONYMOUS
no, i felt boring to read the hook-----dejun ― DE JUN WONG
Sin Yi - It doesn't sounds interesting
PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 12, 2020 09:47AM
― ANONYMOUS
No - The sentence and structure is too simple- isaac noel
― ANONYMOUS
Yfeng - The hook is less seemingly attractive, it doesn't describe
the setting clearly. ― ANONYMOUS
Jayden - not really because it is not that interesting and quite
boring ― ANONYMOUS
i nd it very plain, and boring, almost like a grandfather story, like
the start sounds boring but the plot might be good. -pouya
― ANONYMOUS
I don’t think I will continue reading, because the sentences are
simple and not attractive -yihan ― ANONYMOUS
I think it is not as descriptive as the others, but I still want to know
what happens ― XIN YAN LOW
ZeYou- I would not be interested because the passage was not
speci c enough. ― ANONYMOUS
alyna- I wouldn't want to continue reading it because it is not as
interesting as the others ― ANONYMOUS
max- yes i will continue reading it because i am curious on why he
had one of his worst day of his life ― ANONYMOUS
the stairs. "Today, of all the days you want to be on time" If she
knew what the day would bring, she wouldn't mind asking me to
stay in bed.
Ethan - It is not quite interesting as the dialog could include
descriptive words. ― ANONYMOUS
Yfeng - The dialogs added into the sentence made it boring as if
they were chatting with each other, it doesn't give me the vibes of
reading through the whole passage. ― ANONYMOUS
Jayden - I would want to continue reading because I want to know
why this speci c day he need to be on time. ― ANONYMOUS
no, i cant understand what the hook mean-----dejun
― DE JUN WONG
SIn Yi - its not very interesting and It 's just very normal
― ANONYMOUS
max- i might continue reading it because i can't understand much
from this sentence and i want to read more of it to understand the
text better ― ANONYMOUS
ZeYou- although it’s quite confusing, I would wanna see why they
were in a hurry. ― ANONYMOUS
It's kinda confusing ― ZHEN HAO LIM
I won't continue reading it as it is confusing - Jack ― ANONYMOUS
I like the way dialogs are added, the sentences felt relatable, I
would read this, I wanna know what would happen. ― XIN YAN LOW
I will continue reading it cuz I'm interested to know why the
mother is so worried and won't let the narrater sleep - Kean Hong
― ANONYMOUS
I would not continue reading the story because It doesn't sound
interesting and is quite confusing ― CHUNG CHEOK CHANG
Amin- I don't know what to say. I don't understand anything. I
may/may not continue reading this story. ― AMIN
The sun was warm on my back, I raced to the yellow bus waiting
for me. Resting my butt on the familiar worn leather. My face
light up like a spotlight as I greeted my friends. Laughing and
giggling as the bus rumble down the street and I was on my way
to the worst day of my life.
This seems a little blunt but I would consider reading it
PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 12, 2020 09:44AM
― LAVENASRI KUMAR
Hook 3
I wanna know what happen so I will continue and seems
interesting and it's detailed -Jack ― ANONYMOUS
Have you had a day where you wished it would never exist? They
day had the perfect weather, little did I know of the terrible
things that awaits me in the school
Amin- I don't feel interested inthis because I don't really get what
the whole thing is about ― AMIN
Yfeng - The hook sound quite familiar and relatable to my daily
life, it makes me want to read more of it. ― ANONYMOUS
Maybe, it’s quite detail on describing and what is the worst things
are going to happen -yihan ― ANONYMOUS
Ethan - This hook ask question that makes people feel that they
would want to answer it. ― ANONYMOUS
i would like to see what happens next ― KIT HOU TEOH
Yes I will continue reading, because it makes me wonder what are
the terrible things. -yihan ― ANONYMOUS
max- yes because the writer is trying to make this relatable
Jayden - Yes, i would continue reading because I want to know
how can one thing makes his day miserable ― ANONYMOUS
I like how the hook has describe the surrounding, but it didn't focus
on the worst day part too much - kean hong ― ANONYMOUS
― ANONYMOUS
Yes,I will continue reading because I want to know what are the
terrible things that happens to the narrator
― CHUNG CHEOK CHANG
alyna- I like how it interacts with the reader by asking a question
Ethan - This hook description is quite accurate on the scenery.
― ANONYMOUS
I think this is pretty descriptive, it tells the tiny details, I would
continue reading it, I wanna what makes it the worst day
― XIN YAN LOW
― ANONYMOUS
ZeYou- This doesn’t sound as interesting as the others and is a bit
too plain. ― ANONYMOUS
yes, some terrible things coming towards
Yes, i would continue reading this story because I would like to
know what happen on that day ― CHUNG CHEOK CHANG
The transition to the worst day of his life wasn’t interesting
― DE JUN WONG
― ANONYMOUS
I like the way rhetorical questions are added, I would continue
reading, I wanna know the "terrible thing" ― XIN YAN LOW
i would continues reading to know how was the worst day of his or
her life-----dejun ― DE JUN WONG
The student seemed to have a great day but was unprepared for
what school ought to bring him - very relatable. ― JING XUAN PANG
Yes I would continue reading - The way the writer put it out made
it seem like everything went wrong all of a sudden.
― JING XUAN PANG
I will continue to read it as it is interesting and I wanna know
what's gonna happen -Jack ― ANONYMOUS
ZeYou- I would continue reading this book to see how the bad
things quickly took over the cheerful day for the narrator .
interactive ― ZHEN HAO LIM
― ANONYMOUS
Sin Yi - this sounds like what a student would face and its very
relatable and i would continue reading it ― ANONYMOUS
Amin- No I don't feel interested in this. ― AMIN
Jayden - yes, i would like to continue reading because i want to
know what made the narrator said that ― ANONYMOUS
Very relatable-wayen
― ANONYMOUS
It's like interacting witht he reader ― ANONYMOUS
Amin- Yes this sounds nice. I would like to continue.
― AMIN
PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 12, 2020 09:34AM
Hook 1
"Buzzzz!" the sound of my alarm clock droned in my ears as I
struggled to come awake. Glimpse of memory hit me, I sprung
straight on my bed. Today is my big day. I can't be late.
Yes I would continue reading to see why it's such a big day
― LAVENASRI KUMAR
PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 12, 2020 09:41AM
Hook 2
seems interesting so I will continue -Jack ― ANONYMOUS
Ethan - The hook is how the buzz makes a scene and makes people
curious. ― ANONYMOUS
I like this hook cuz I'm curious of what did he just remember. Kean Hong ― ANONYMOUS
amin- I would like to read this because I really want to know what
is his big day about. ― AMIN
Yes, the uses of onomatopoeia really caught my attention - Isaac
noel ― ANONYMOUS
yes,i would like to read because writer mention' today is my big
day' that made curiosity----dejun ― DE JUN WONG
alyna- I would continue to read this book because I am curious
about his big day ― ANONYMOUS
this hook is very intresting, and a good eye cather, makes wanna
know why its a big day-Pouya ― ANONYMOUS
Yfeng - The way how the hook was structured, it described a
mysterious setting which arouses my curiosity. ― ANONYMOUS
Yes, I would Like to know what happens to that day- yihan
yes,I will continue reading because it makes me feel curious why
the narrator cannot be late ― CHUNG CHEOK CHANG
I liked the way a sound effect is added, I would continue reading
this, I want to know what is it about the big day ― XIN YAN LOW
Very curious about his big day-wayen
― ANONYMOUS
Sin Yi - I will want to continue because i'm interested in nding
out what his big day is ― ANONYMOUS
ZeYou- I would want to see why the narrator can’t be late for this
day that seemed so important for him ― ANONYMOUS
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Jayden - I will continue reading because I want to know why it is
his big day ― ANONYMOUS