263 Homework due 11/14
First and Last Name:________________
Bring this assignment in next week for homework points. I will give up to
ten points to a paper that shows effort and thought. A few mistakes are
okay as long as it is clear that you tried. A lazy looking paper will not get
full credit.
See page 299-300 of Top 20 for a complete list of conjunctions. Chapter 17 will
help you choose the correct structure. Also, each sentence must have a subject
and a verb. If it does not, it is a fragment. In addition, a logical conjunction must
be used.
Rewrite each item and fix each of these sentence combining errors.
1. These toys are inexpensive, they are made from organic materials.
2. More importantly, learning when they play with new toys.
3. I do not agree with him because there are various ways to play with
commercial toys, children would not get tired of them so easily.
4. We used to work so hard to make good toys. However, who ever made
the good toys got more attention from family and friends.
Rewrite the sentences and correct subject verb agreement errors.
5. Their attention often get relegated back to informal toys.
6. We have many toys that is good.
7. Producing these toys are complicated.
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Rewrite these sentences while correcting for missing verbs or nonstandard verb forms
8. I am strongly agree.
9. Scissors, a few colored pencils or a block of wood are all can be toys.
10. I think that either kind of toy that mentioned above is necessary to help
children learn.
11. Homemade toys better than toys bought from a store.
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