Research Project Tips Steps in the Project 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 11. 12. 13. 14. 15. 16. 17. Choose area of interest Do some initial research to narrow your focus Create paper proposal Begin in-depth research into topic Create annotated bibliography Revise citations and find additional sources as needed Take notes on sources Create initial thesis statement Continue research/notes and revise thesis as needed Create outline Research any missing pieces and revise outline as needed Write draft Revise and expand draft Edit and proofread Create title page and works cited page Turn in final research paper Present your paper to the class Choosing a Topic • Think about what areas or issues of American history interest you • Read list of possible topics, browse topics in U.S. History in Context database, and flip through textbook to get ideas • Do initial research on Internet and databases to narrow topic • The narrower, the better Research Paper Proposal • A research proposal explains what you want to research • Your proposal will be a 200-300 word paragraph that includes: – Description of topic – Why its worthwhile and interests you – What you plan to focus on – What you already know / what you need to find out Research Proposal Example For my research paper, I will be researching the Exodusters. The Exodusters were African Americans who moved to the West after Reconstruction ended. They moved to the West, and especially Kansas, mostly because they believed they would have better opportunities for advancement there than in the South. This is an important topic because it highlights America’s history of racial discrimination and promotes the idea of the West being a great place of economic and social opportunity. More specifically, I want to look into the experiences of the Exodusters in the West. I want to find out how they were treated, and maybe examine if they were treated better than African Americans living in the South in the late 1800s. I know that blacks in the South were not able to fully exercise their political rights, had few economic opportunities, were segregated from whites, and were often exploited, beaten, and lynched by white supremacists. If I focus my paper around this comparison, I will have to find information about the discrimination against blacks in the South. I will also have to find information about Exodusters’ relationships with white settlers, if the West developed laws imposing racial segregation, and how economically successful African Americans were in the West. If this comparison is too daunting, since I would be basically researching two topics instead of one, I could just focus on why Exodusters left the South or on how they were treated in the West. The Research Process 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. Look for books and other print sources using the MHS Library catalogue and databases Look for reliable web resources, possibly using Google Advanced Search and Google Scholar Look for additional print sources in the Abbott Library catalogue, the NOBLE catalogue, and its subscription databases Possibly request books through inter-library loan Read and take notes on sources Find more sources to address issues that arise when reading your sources, creating the outline, draft, etc. Continue reading and taking notes on sources • Remember: You need at least 5 sources- 2 of which must be print, 2 of which must be primary sources, and 1 of which must be full-length Catalogue Search for Books • To search for books at MHS, go to Marblehead HS web site HS Links MHS Library Search Our Online Catalog – Search for your general topic first under Keyword, possibly under Subject • To search for books at Abbott Library or other town’s libraries, go to Abbott’s website (abbottlibrary.org) Online Catalogue NOBLE CATALOGUE – Search for your topic in Keyword or in Topic – First search items in Marblehead, then “View Entire Collection” • After search, read item records to see if it will be helpful – Is the item is in/out? – Note subject terms & call number – Read summary • Can compile a temporary list of resources – In the MHS catalogue, use “+” button to save to temp basket (to print Click “Temp Basket” Click Printer Icon Select “Bibliographic Format” File Print ) – In NOBLE, click “Add It To My List” to save to list Databases • Not websites, but compilations of print sources available to library patrons • Most helpful in gaining background info on a topic • Databases through MHS Library – – – – – US History in Context (mostly encyclopedia articles) Biography in Context (short bios) Annals of American History (mostly encyclopedia articles) Proquest Historical Newspapers JSTOR (scholarly journal articles) • Databases through Abbott Library – EBSCO (mostly magazine articles) – Fifties, Sixties, Seventies, Eighties, and Nineties in America (mostly encyclopedia articles) • Databases through Boston Public Library – Historical New York Times and other old newspapers Database and Internet Search Strategies • Choose search terms that make sense given your topic – Omit extraneous words (the, it, of) – Use Synonyms and Related Terms – “Quotes” to search a full phrase – Use AND, OR, NOT to broaden/limit results – Sort/limit results by date published – Google Advanced Search can also limit results to a website type with “Site:URLSuffix” Evaluating Web Resources 1. Read the URL to determine organization 2. Find out if the author is reliable by reading the Author Bio/About Us/Contact US/FAQ • Look for Point of View (Bias) 3. Determine Currency (Last Updated) 4. Find a Backup Resource to confirm info in questionable resources Reading the URL .com Commercial Standard URL - for commercial and noncommercial websites. Any person/entity may register. .edu Educational For educational institutions accredited by the US DOE. .gov Governmental For governmental entities/agencies. .info Information For informative internet resources. Any person/entity may register. .net Network .org Organization For organizations that network technologies. Any person/entity may register. For non-commercial entities. Any person/entity may register. Finding Primary Sources • Look at the citations in secondary sources and find the primary sources they used online • Go to online databases of primary sources – – – – – – – – Library of Congress National Archives American Presidency Project America in Class Documenting the American South Gilder Lehrman Institute of American History Proquest Historical Newspapers Database Archives of libraries and universities Keeping Track of Research • Take notes on relevant information from sources in an organized way – Note Card Method- write related category and source on top of note card and fact/quote in center – Source Notes Method- put bibliographic citation at top of page and then organize notes from that source by topic/chapter/page – Others? • Always put phrases from sources in quotes or in own words and keep track of where (source, pg#) info is from Notes on Research- Note Card Method Notes on Research- Source Notes Method Annotated Bibliography • An annotated bibliography cites and describes the sources one plans to use in a research paper • Your annotated bibliography will include citations and annotations for at least 5 sources, of which 2 will be print resources, 2 will be primary sources, and 1 of which will be full-length • For each source you must – Begin with its citation in the Chicago style – Include an annotation with • • • • A description of the source A description of the source’s credibility A description of how the source will help you Any specific ideas or pieces of information you expect to use from the source • Format- Citations should be in alphabetical order (according to first letter of citation), with a line between each citation and its annotation Annotated Bibliography Example Gallagher, Gary W. The Confederate War. Cambridge, MA: Harvard University Press, 1997. Gallagher is one of the leading historians on the Civil War. In this book, he focuses on the Confederacy and explains that the Confederacy did not lose the Civil War because of a lack of will or internal division, but because of its losses on the battlefield. His argument seems to go against the beliefs of many other historians. I plan to use this book to help me show that the Union won the Civil War because of its military successes. It emphasizes the fact the Confederacy had more casualties than the Union did and shows the Union’s effectiveness in various battles. One chapter examines how Confederate desertions hurt the military. Another section on Confederate surrender will be helpful because it emphasizes how weak the Confederate military was in 1865. Next Citation Chicago Manual of Style Bibliographic Citations • Citations include all relevant source information in this history-specific format – – – – – – – – – • Book with One Author- Lastname, Firstname. Title of Book. Place of publication: Publisher, Year of publication. Book with Multiple Authors- Lastname, Firstname and Firstname Lastname. Title of Book. Place of publication: Publisher, Year of publication. Book Complied by an Editor (with no author) – Lastname, Firstname, ed. Title of Book. Place of publication: Publisher, Year of publication. Article/Section in a Book with an Editor- Article/Section Author’s Lastname, Firstname. “Article/Section Title.” In Title of Book, edited by Firstname Lastname. Place of publication: Publisher, Year of publication. Website- Lastname, Firstname. “Title of Web Page.” Publishing Organization or Name of Website in Italics. Publication date/Date of Last Modification if available or Access date. URL. (not hyperlinked) Newspaper Article- Lastname, Firstname. “Article Title.” Newspaper Title, Publication Month Day, Year. Url if applicable. Article found in a Database- Full Citation for Original Source. Database Name. Documentary- Lastname, Firstname. Title of Work. Directed/Performed by Firstname Lastname. Original Release Year. City: Studio/Distributor, Video release year. Medium. Photograph/Painting- Lastname, Firstname of Photographer/Artist. Title. Date. Medium. Size if applicable. Housing Institution or Collection if applicable. From: Database name or Citation for source where found image. Please note that the second and subsequent lines of a bibliographic citation are indented (press “Enter” then “Tab” to accomplish this) Chicago Style Citation Generation Help • To create your citations, you may use an online citation generator; just make sure you use the manual entry mode AND double check your citations – Suggested Generator: EasyBib.com (make account at school for full access) – Others: Citationmachine.net, Bibme.com, Sourceaid.com • For more information on how to create bibliographic citations using the Chicago Manual of Style Format, visit its website http://www.chicagomanualofstyle.org/tools_citationguide.ht ml or Purdue University’s OWL website http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/717/1/ Thesis Statement • 1-2 sentences that explain your argument • May or may not have a map (subcategories of supporting ideas) Thesis Statement Examples • The failure of the Wagner-Evans Child Refugee Bill illustrates the United States’ anti-Semitism and isolationism in the 1930s. • Through its songs and its actions as a musical group, Sweet Honey in the Rock protests oppression of all forms, especially racial injustice. Although often categorized as womenidentified music and as gospel music, Sweet Honey in the Rock is fundamentally a group of protest. • In the struggle to gain greater civil rights for MexicanAmericans, Cesar Chavez’s farm workers’ strikes and the 1968 Los Angeles student walkouts reveal a common commitment to nonviolent protest and a Chicano consciousness. Outline • Intro: – Ideas for framework / hook – Key background info – Thesis • Subtopics/Paragraphs – Basic description of subtopic and its connection to thesis (may want to write a draft topic sentence) – Supporting details • Possible quotes/facts to illustrate the supporting detail (optional) • Conclusion: – Restatement of thesis (don’t need to write this out yet) – Possible deeper insights or connections Sample Partial Outline On Causes of Civil War Introduction (1 paragraph, .5 pages) I. Background on how the US was established as a nation bound together by its similar beliefs and traditions, but as it progressed, regional differences grew. II. Define “North” and “South” III. Thesis: Civil War broke out between the North and South due to the growing economic, moral, and political differences between the two regions. Subtopic 1: Economic Differences between North and South (1 paragraph, 1 page) Economic differences between the North and the South created tension between the two regions. I. The Northern economy was increasingly based on industry (in sources a, b, c) a. Geography bad for farming but good for trade b. Explain rise of industry in mid-1800s and how North produced 90% of manufactured goods (use industry graphs) II. The Southern economy was dependent on agriculture (in sources a and c) a. Because of geography and high demand for products like cotton, South produced most of nation’s cotton and it brought great profit b. Link success of agriculture to use of slaves, looking at their economic value c. Maybe include Southern resentment of Northern industrial success Subtopic 2: Moral Differences between the North and South (2 paragraphs, 1.5 pages) Differing opinions between the North and the South about slavery contributed to the onrush of the Civil War. Paragraph 1- Rise of Abolitionism in the North (in sources a, b, d) I. As the North became increasingly industrial, they depended less on slave labor a. Industry attracted immigrants and their cheap labor helped it grow II. Partially because Northerners did not depend on slave labor, public opinion turned against it as unjust, cruel, and wrong III. Link rise of abolitionism to Great Awakening Paragraph 2- Continued Support for Slavery in the South (in sources c, e, f) I. Many Southerners supported slavery because they relied on it economically II. Some whites saw slaves as happy and needing their help III. Link to the different religious and cultural experiences of the South Sample Outline on Development of the Dust Bowl Paragraph 1- Introduction - Define/describe Dust Bowl- what it was, where it developed, how long it lasted - Briefly emphasize scope and severity of the Dust Bowl - Thesis: Although drought is common in the Great Plains, the Dust Bowl was mostly a man-made problem. The overfarming of the Great Plains turned a drought into a national disaster Paragraph 2- Natural Drought Cycle - Explain geography of the Great Plains- massive grassland with fertile topsoil that has developed over a long period of time - Drought cycle is key to the climate of the Great Plains; explain prior droughts - Explain role of weather in the creation of the 1930s drought but how the Dust Bowl was much worse than typical droughts Paragraph 3- Settlement of Great Plains - Rapid settlement developed in late 1800s after purchase , conquest, and railroads - Rise of cattle herding and wheat- maybe link to rise in immigration and growing demand for food - Humans changed natural landscape of Plain- sea of green to brown, exposed top soil to elements Paragraph 4-New Farming Technologies - General rise in agricultural machines and development of mechanized farming - Explain impact of tractor (esp. gasoline tractor), enclosed gears on tractors, increasingly lighter tractors; harvest combine machine too - The new machines led to more profit, expanded plowing Paragraph 5- New Farm Methods - Increased use of fertilizer to increase yeild - Ending of summer fallowing to grow more wheat - Even less time for topsoil to recover Paragraph 6- Rose of WWI in Increasing Demand for Wheat - Destruction of farmland in Europe and focus of European economy on war machines/weapons increased demand for American wheat - Wheat as an easy product to turn into food for European and then American soldiers - Give statistics to show the rising price of wheat and its correlation to increased acreage of farms in Great Plains - Production remained high after WWI, with falling prices sometimes causing farmers to grow more (maybe turn into separate paragraph) Paragraph 7- Slow Response to Dust Bowl - Many didn’t recognize its severity or causes at first and kept on plowing, making it worse; shows general lack of understanding of environment - Govt. soil conservation programs (trees, contour plowing, conservation districts) came in mid-1930s but took a while to improve the area Paragraph 8- Conclusion - The increased mechanization of farming and high demand for wheat led to the use of poor farming practices that ultimately led to the development of the Dust Bowl - Maybe explain what we have learned from the Dust Bowl and how it shows the large impact humans have on the environment and how they depend on it - Link to continued and possibly worsening droughts in the West and how human activity could make things better or worse Strategies for Avoiding Plagiarism • Put in quotations everything that comes directly from the text, especially when taking notes • Put quotations around phrases of three or more words that you take from someplace else • When paraphrasing, be sure you are not just rearranging or replacing a few words, but render someone else’s ideas and info in a new form • Check your paraphrase against the original text to be sure you have not accidentally used the same phrases or words, and that the information is accurate • Properly cite all quoted and paraphrased info. Paraphrasing without citing the source is still plagiarism. • When in doubt, cite Citing Sources in the Chicago Style • Include footnotes at end (after period) of a paraphrased or quoted sentence • Type “CTRL + ALT + F” or click “Insert Footnote” under “References” in Word 2012 – First footnote for a source- full citation + page # in a slightly different form than the bibliographic citation – Second footnote for a source- Author’s last name, Title of source, p. #. – Should automatically be in 10 pt. font Sample Paragraph with Footnotes When the United States entered World War I in 1917, the prospect of AfricanAmerican participation brought the issue of American democracy and equal rights to the forefront. President Wilson pledged the war would make the world “safe for democracy,” suggesting to black Americans that their patriotic support could lead to justice and true democracy at home.⁴ Many African-American leaders like W.E.B. Du Bois saw the war as an opportunity to gain political freedoms. He called for blacks to “forget our special grievances and close our ranks to shoulder with our own white fellow citizens and the allied nations that are fighting for democracy.”⁵ Although some blacks believed that a temporary pause in civil rights activism would seriously damage black’s struggle for freedom, most African-Americans followed suit and supported the war with the hope of compensation after its conclusion.⁶ African-Americans contributed to cause as soldiers, industrial workers, and purchasers of Liberty Bonds. Within the black community, participation in the war effort augmented feelings of racial pride and more realistic hopes for citizenship. Believing they had proved themselves as true Americans, blacks were determined to attain the rights that the Constitution pledged to all Americans. ___________________________________________________________________________ 4 Arthur E. Barbeau and Florette Henri, The Unknown Soldiers: African-American Troops in World War I (New York: De Capo Press, 1996), 7. 5 W.E.B. Du Bois, “Close Ranks,” Crisis 16 (July 1918), in Let Nobody Turn Us Around: Voices of Resistance, Reform, and Renewal, ed. Manning Marable and Leith Mullings (Lanham, MD: Rowman & Littlefield Publishers, Inc., 2000), 243. 6 Barbeau and Henri, The Unknown Soldiers, 15. Formatting Info in Footnotes • First footnote citation for a source includes all relevant source information + page # (if applicable) but in slightly different order/format than bibliographic citation – – – – – – – – – – Book with One Author- Firstname Lastname, Title of Book (Place of publication: Publisher, Year of publication), page number. Book with Multiple Authors- Firstname Lastname and Firstname Lastname, Title of Book (Place of publication: Publisher, Year of publication), page number. Book Complied by an Editor (with no author) – Firstname Lastname, ed., Title of Book (Place of publication: Publisher, Year of publication), page number. Article/Section in a Book with an Editor- Article/Section Author’s Firstname Lastname, “Article/Section Title,” in Title of Book, edited by Firstname Lastname (Place of publication: Publisher, Year of publication), page number. Article/Section in a Book- Article/Section Author’s Firstname Lastname, “Article/Section Title,” in + Book Citation Website- Firstname Lastname, “Title of Web Page,” Publishing Organization or Name of Website in Italics, Publication date/Date of last modification if available or access date, URL. Newspaper Article- Firstname Lastname,“Article Title,” Newspaper Title, Publication Month Day, Year, Url if applicable. Article found in a Database- Full Citation for Original Source, Database Name. Documentary-Firstname Lastname, Title of Work, Directed/Performed by Firstname Lastname, Original Release Year, City: Studio/Distributor, Video release year, Medium. Photograph/Painting- Firstname Lastname of Photographer/Artist, Title, Date, Medium, Size if applicable, Housing Institution or Collection if applicable, from: Database name or Citation for source where found image. Rough Draft • Format- Times New Roman, 12-point font, double-spaced, standard 1-inch margins • Length- Must be at least 3 pages, and include at least 3 paragraphs • Citations- Must cite all quoted and paraphrased info, and include at least 4 footnotes • Tips– – – – – – – Update/finish outline first Ask questions on organization, info, evidence, etc. Begin with intro and try to write in order Have all sources and notes with you when writing Cite sources/make footnotes as you go Read and revise paragraphs after writing them The better/longer product you turn in, the better/more feedback you’ll get Final Paper Format • Title page with title in Caps centered a third of the way down the page and several lines later Your Name United States History II Honors Ms. Bachman/Humphrey Due Date • • • • • • Introduction begins at top of 1st page 1-inch margins all around Double-spaced Times New Roman 12 pt. font for text Block quotes for quotations 5 or more lines Page numbers in upper right hand corner of the first page of text with 1 Works Cited list on separate piece of paper after essay Final Reminders • Give key background info in intro and end with clear thesis • Link topic sentences back to thesis • Use lots of evidence (details, examples, quotes, etc.), in-depth sources, and primary sources to support thesis • Make sure you use at least 5 sources, with at least 2 print, 2 primary sources, 1 full-length • Include analysis throughout the paper • Cite all paraphrased and quoted ideas in footnotes • Put footnotes in 10 point Times New Roman font and change formatting from bibliographic citation • Restate thesis and include deeper insights in conclusion • Include bibliographic citations for all sources cited in paper (no annotations) in a separate “Works Cited” page at end of essay • Revise, edit, and proofread, possibly getting advice from a friend/relative • Review rubric